Youssef
toefl test : integrat writing tast 1 can please correct my mistakes. The lecture and the reading are both discussing organic food, while the reading states that the arguments about organic food and its disadvanges. However the lecture refutes this, saying that there are increasing to produce the organic food. First of all, though the reading claims that the price of organic food is more expensive than the no organic food for that the reading gives example in grocery can find the strawebeis organic double in no organic, but the lecture argues that the no organic content 50 chimecal pestisate to drop this food In addition, the reading makes the argument that it is difficult to find the organic food in story, the lecture counters this point by stating it is not true this information because in big story can find the section organic and the person can buy the organic milk Lastly, the reading passage argues that there is not difference in taste between organic or no organic food. However the reading dismisses this claim by clarify the no organic milk content the genetic called RBGH this element can cause the concer for that the lecture advice the people to investment in their health.
May 30, 2015 4:12 PM
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toefl test : integrat writing tast 1 can please correct my mistakes.

 

The lecture and the reading both discuss organic food.  However, while the reading offers arguments about the disadvanges of organic food, the lecture refutes these arguments, and makes the case for increasing the production of organic food.


For instance, the reading claims that organic food is more expensive than non-organic food. As an example, it states that in the grocery store organic strawberries are sold for double the price of non-organic strawberries. But the lecture argues that the true cost is hidden since 50 chemical pesticides are used to grow these non-organic berries.

 

In addition, the reading makes the argument that it is difficult to find organic food in the store. The lecture states this is not true; in a big store you can find the organic section and buy organic milk, etc. 


Lastly, the reading argues that there is no difference in taste between organic or non-organic food. The lecuture points out that non-organic milk contains something called RBGH. RBGH can cause cancer, so the lecture advises people to invest in their health by drinking organic milk.

May 30, 2015
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