Youssef
tast 1; integrat writing correct my mistakes please The lecture and the reading are both discussing about space exploration. While the reading states that we must the benefit science for space exploration, the lecture refutes this idea, saying that we must the benefit the science for developing the live because there are many children live in poor situation in USA. First of all, though the reading claims that all the new technology was developed by space exploration. For example dishes and computer, conversely the lecture argues that we must focus to find solution problem in our mother earth such as solution of the education. In addition, the reading argues that we will invest to travel to space by shuttle because it is future tourism. However, the lecture makes other argument that the travel to space is very expensive and space will be for super rich people. Lastly, the reading passage argues that the space explore can by it to find the life in other planet but the lecture dismisses this claim are alone in cosmic this idea will affect in the children because they will be hungry also the education are decrease for that the lecture say we must benefit the science for develop our planet.
May 30, 2015 7:02 PM
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tast 1; integrat writing correct my mistakes please

The lecture and the reading are both discussing about space exploration. While the reading states that we must benefit science for space exploration, the lecture refutes this idea, saying that we must benefit science for developing lives because there are many children living in poor situations in USA.
First of all, the reading claims that all the new technology was developed by space exploration, for example dishes and computer. Conversely the lecture argues that we must focus to find the solution to the problems found in our mother earth such as a solution for education.
In addition, the reading argues that we will invest in travel to space by shuttle because it is future tourism. However, the lecture makes another argument that travel to space is very expensive and space will be for super rich people.
Lastly, the reading passage argues that through space exploration, we can find life in other planets but the lecture dismisses this claim. It is alone in this idea which will affect the children because they will be hungry and also the education decreases for that the lecture say we must benefit from science to develop our planet.

June 28, 2015
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