Maks
My first notice. Hello. My name is Maks, I live in Russia, I'm 16 years and i learning English to the college. I wanna find friends from other countries In order to communicate. Write me please)
May 30, 2015 8:24 PM
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My First Note

Hello. My name is Maks, and I live in Russia. 
I'm 16 years and I am learning English in order to go to the college. I want to find friends from other countries in order to communicate.
Write me please

 

"Wanna" is in phoenitic (spoken) English only, never in written. You should use "want to."

"I" is always capitalized. 

Good job!

May 30, 2015
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