My family

Today I want to introduce my family to you. I am a Chinese mother who got has 2 kids. The older boy is 3 years old, the younger boy is only 8 months. I want to improve my English because I have to teach my kids. A The 3 years old boy is very naughty and very active. He is unable to stop for one minute can't stop. I feel tired all day. I don't have enough time to sleep. Even to eating, I have to hold the baby. Yesterday, the baby put his left hand in the hot bowl and the hot rice hot scalded him. And then, he cried hardly very loudly. This is my family. What a mess!

<em>(Remember to put a space after a full stop or comma. Sounds like a busy job!)</em>

My family

Today I want to introduce my family to you.I am a Chinese mother who got has 2 kids.The older boy is 3 years old,the younger boy is only 8 months old .I want to improve my English because I have to teach my kids.A The 3 year old is very naughty and very active. He can't stop even for one minute. I feel tired all day. I don't have enough time to sleep and even while eating I have to hold the baby. Yesterday the baby put his left hand in the hot bowl and the hot rice hot burned him. And then, he started crying loudly. This is my family. What a mess!

Ps: Indeed sounds really messy.

My family

Today I want to introduce my family to you. I am a Chinese mother with 2 kids. The older boy is 3 years old and the younger boy is only 8 months old. I want improve my English because I have to teach my kids. A 3 year old boy is very naughty and he is very active. He does not stop for one minute can't stop. I feel tired all day and I don't have enough time to sleep, even eating; I have to hold the baby. Yesterday, the baby put his left hand in the hot bowl of hot rice and it (scalded?)him. And then, he cried in pain. This is my family,what a mess!