Mathieu
Visit of my friend. I have finally met my friend from Newfoundland. He is kind but he is a little shy. It is normal because we don't know each other but I guess if we speak again he will be not shy anymore. Brian explained me the difficulties he had to come in Quebec city and how it was difficult to speak French for him. I helped him to buy a bus pass for the month because he didn't know where to go and how to ask it. My friend is doing an immersion program for learning French. I'm glad that it is my first language because it looks difficult to learn this language. I will probably see him again on Friday because I don't have any day off since then.
Jun 29, 2015 11:36 PM
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I have finally met my friend from Newfoundland. He is kind but he is a little shy. It is normal because we don't know each other but I guess if we speak again he will be not shy anymore. Brian explained to me the difficulties he had to come to Quebec city and how difficult it was to speak French for him. I helped him to buy a bus pass for the month because he didn't know where to go and how to ask for it. My friend is doing an immersion program to learn French. I'm glad that it is my first language because it looks difficult to learn this language. I will probably see him again on Friday because I don't have any days off until then.

 

<em>Are there a lot of tourists in Quebec in the summer?</em>

June 30, 2015

Visit of My Friend {or "My Friend's Visit"}*

I have finally met my friend from Newfoundland. He is kind, but he is a little shy. It is normal because we don't know each other, but I guess if we speak again, he will be not be shy anymore. Brian explained to me the difficulties he had to in coming in to Quebec City, and how it was difficult to speak French for him. I helped him to buy a bus pass for the month {or "a monthly bus pass"} because he didn't know where to go and how to ask for it. My friend is doing an immersion program for learning French. I'm glad that it is my first language because it looks difficult to learn this language. I will probably see him again on Friday because I don't have any days off since until then.***

 

*Main words in titles are capitalized.

**Or "...how to ask for one".

***Or you could also re-arrange the phrasing as such: "I will probably not see him again until Friday because I do not have any days off until then."

 

Great job, just some prepositional tweaking needed.

June 30, 2015
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