hanmay
I am busy these days. I went to the park near my home. The view of the park was very beautiful, but it was strong wind and cold likes in autumn. After went home I felt I had a cold, so I took a rest at home on Sunday. All of the person hate working on Mondays, I hate too. I had several meetings and wrote many replies for the guests. I didn’t have a time to read an article. I was busy today too. I had two meetings and after the meetings I realized my tasks will be increased. So I will have no free time to learn English. I am very sad, but I try to get more time to continue my learning. Hanmay 30/06/2015
Jun 30, 2015 7:57 AM
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I am busy these days.  I Have Been Busy Recently

I went to the park near my home. The view of in the park was very beautiful, but it there was a strong wind and it was cold likes in autumn. After I got went home I felt I had a cold, so I took a rested at home on Sunday. All of the person Everyone hates working on Mondays, I hate it too. I had several meetings and wrote many replies to customers for the guests. I didn’t have a the time to read an article. I was busy today too. I had two meetings and after the meetings I realized I will have more work my tasks will be increased. So I will have no free time to learn English. I am very sad, but I'll try to find get more time to continue my learning.

Hanmay
30/06/2015

June 30, 2015
In summary, some task you must are very hard. To make matters worse, your condition is bad. Feeling tired and a lot of stress caused by a cold or your tasks you must do make you more stressful .Taking rest is the best for your health. I suggest you should sleep enough for your busy day. Good luck!
June 30, 2015
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