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Please correct my bengali Ami parque giechi. I saw a big dog he growled at me and i thought he was going to bite me? (how u say that) I yelled at the dog and he ran away. He was a big dog, O ekta boro kukur. He looked like a german sheperd. So then i left the park. I got in the car and another car almost hit me from the side. He was speeding and almost hit me. It was his fault. I was driving down the road when I spotted a deer. I got out and took a picture, He took off and left. So then I got home really late and I went on the computer to use italki to learn a language.
Jul 1, 2015 9:13 AM
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Ami parque giechi. I saw a big dog he growled at me and i thought he was going to bite me? (Ami parque giechi.(Ami parque giechi. Ami dekhlam ekti boro kukur. Oti amar dike rage gor gor korchilo ar ami vablam O hoyto amake kamre debe)

 

I yelled at the dog and he ran away. He was a big dog, O ekta boro kukur. He looked like a german sheperd. (Ami kukur-er dike chitkar korlam ar se doure chole gelo. Oti ekti boro kukur chilo. O ekti German Sheperd er moto lagchilo)


So then i left the park. (Otoeb ami park theke prosthan korlam) 

 

I got in the car and another car almost hit me from the side(Ami garir moddhe chilam, ar onno ekti gari pray pas theke amake dhakka diye felechilo). He was speeding and almost hit me(Tini druto gari challchilen ebong amake pray dhakka diye felechilen). It was his fault (Eti chilo tar vul)

 

I was driving down the road when I spotted a deer (Ami raster nicher dike gari challachilam sei somoy ami ekti harin(deer) dekhlam). I got out and took a picture, He took off and left (Ami beria elam ebong ekti chobi nilam, harin-ti chole gelo ebong ami prosthan korlam).

 

So then I got home really late and I went on the computer to use italki to learn a language. (Ami sotti derite barite pouche chilam ebong ami ekti bhasa(language) sikhte italki bhaboher korte computer-er kache giyechilam)

July 2, 2015

Ami parque giechi (আমি পার্কে গিয়েছি). I saw a big dog (আমি দেখলাম একটি বড় কুকুর) he growled at me (সে আমার দিকে রাগে গরগর করছিল ) and i thought he was going to bite me?  (আর আমি ভাবলাম সে হয়ত আমাকে কামড়ে দেবে।)


I yelled at the dog( আমি কুকুরটির দিকে চিৎকার করলাম) and he ran away(আর সে দৌড়ে চলে গেল।). He was a big dog(সেটি ছিল একটি বড় কুকুর।), He looked like a german sheperd( সেটি একটি জার্মান Sheperd মতো লাগছিল)

So then i left the park. ( অতএব আমি পার্ক থেকে প্রস্থান করলাম)


I got in the car and another car almost hit me from the side(আমি গাড়ির মধ্যে ছিলাম, আর অন্য একটি গাড়ি প্রায় পাশ থেকে আমাকে ধাক্কা দিয়ে ফেলেছিল). He was speeding and almost hit me(তিনি দ্রুত গাড়ী চালাছিলেন এবং আমাকে প্রায় ধাক্কা দিয়ে ফেলেছিলেন). It was his fault (এটি ছিল তার ভুল).


I was driving down the road (আমি রাস্তার নিচের দিকে ড্রাইভিং করছিলাম) when I spotted a deer(আমি সেই মুহূর্তে একটি হরিণ দেখলাম). I got out and took a picture(আমি বেরিয়ে এলাম এবং একটি ছবি তুললাম), He took off and left (হরিণটি চলে গেল এবং আমি প্রস্থান করলাম ).


So then I got home really late (আমি সত্যিই দেরতে বাড়িতে পৌছে ছিলাম) and I went on the computer to use italki to learn a language। (আমি একটি ভাষা শিখতে italki ব্যবহার করতে কম্পিউটারের কাছে গিয়েছিলাম)

July 1, 2015
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November 18, 2016

Please correct my bengali

Ami parque giechilam. I saw a big dog he growled at me and i thought he was going to bite me? (ami akti boro kukur dekhesilm jeta amake dekhe gor gor korchilo ebong ami vabsilam kukurti ki amake kamrabe?

I yelled at the dog and he ran away. He was a big dog, O ekta boro kukur. He looked like a german sheperd. (ami kukurtir dikey jore chitkar korlam ar kukurti doure chole gelo.Kukurti besh boro chilo. Otake dekhte onekta german sheperd er moto lagsilo)


So then i left the park. (tarpor ami park theke chole gelam)


I got in the car and another car almost hit me from the side. He was speeding and almost hit me. It was his fault. (ami garir vitor silam ebong onno akti gari amake peray dhakka diye felsilo.Se onek jore gari chalassilo ebong amake peray dhakka diye felsilo.Eta tar vul silo)


I was driving down the road when I spotted a deer. I got out and took a picture, He took off and left. (jokhon ami akta horin dekhte pelam tokhon ami rastar nicher dikey gari chalassilm.ami ber holam ebong chobi tullam, horinti chole gelo)


So then I got home really late and I went on the computer to use italki to learn a language. (erfole amar basay ashte deri hoye gelo ebong ami computer er kase gelam italki bebohar kore ekti vasha shekhar jonno)

July 16, 2016
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