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My Lucky Day One day my mother said me, "Hey! here you have a coin. Why don't you go to buy some bread?". When I was running through the street, the coin fell from my hand. I didn't know where the coin was. Then I started to search under cars, near trees, under the seats, here and there. I was finding another coins, maybe with low value, and I continued searching for my coin. But, I never found it. I sat when I was boring. I counted the spare change that I had found and... Wow! I had found more money than my mother had gave me!. "Today is my lucky day!" I thought. Then, I could bought the bread that my mother said me, and also, some sweets for me.
Jul 1, 2015 4:16 PM
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My Lucky Day

One day my mother said me, "Hey! Here's you have a coin. Why don't you go to buy some bread?".
When I was running down through the street, the coin fell from my hand.

I didn't know where the coin had gone.was. Then I started to search under cars, near trees, under the seats, here and there.

I found was finding another low denomination coins, maybe with low value, and I continued searching for my coin. But, I never found it.

I sat when I was bored and boring. I counted the spare change that I had found and...

Wow! I had found more money than my mother had given gave me!. "Today is my lucky day!" I thought.

Then, I was able to could bought buy the bread that my mother had asked for said me, and also, some sweets for me.

July 1, 2015
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