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女丑的帝国 在太深的表层土,在天山下面,在女丑的帝国-死人的上帝。入口执行迷宫有阴暗的洞穴,有致命的矛圈套,坠落门和燃烧火。在地狱路的终点是帝国的入口。石头墙大的100米和有太多棺材。没死人在帝国穿过,有魔法的圈套,从未死的火和金子的珍宝死人带来给他们事先的生命。所有永远的下来表层土来这里。 帝国是无止境的迷宫有太多房间,楼梯和骨。女丑的“死人军队”,吓人武装的尸骨,坚守每人可以跑过帝国。还是有太多金刚石和金子,每个小偷信任某人进入女丑的帝国。在魏国,蜀国和吴国的战争,女丑扩大她的帝国给都的灵魂在战场坠落了。他们都现在是女丑的孩子。他们有武器他们带来生命的世界了,女丑可以寄他们生命的人恐吓他们,人忘记她了。 血的河填满帝国,有骨的塑像。歌曲填满空气听起来睡眠的歌曲,给死人睡眠。说在墙的里面,尊重女丑和讲述生命和死。一个说:“得到生命是得到死。有永远的安和安静也是自由的人的忧虑得是女丑的佣人。” 帝国太大的房间是女丑的御座房间。有一个红的连衣裙有黑条,女丑在她的御座建造了有上百人的头颅。在这她命令死人她叫“我孩子”。她在战争跟蚩尤-战神,盗窃了他坠落士兵的灵魂是蚩尤的财产。女丑是恶魔的上帝还是她知道每个人和每个上帝可以毁坏她帝国。死不可以杀。 ATTENTION As always you can find the translation in the very first comment under this notebook entry, due to the letter limit. This one took me much sweat and time because during translating my own English text into Chinese, I saw what kind of a burden I put to myself. Hopefully I did not pushed my luck too far because my low Chinese skills have been put on a hard test at this one, my own invented story. One day in my life I want to visit the Beijing Opera. I heard 女丑 is one of the most liked figures of it. I wonder if in the opera 女丑 is like how I wrote about her right now.
Jul 1, 2015 6:20 PM
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@Alan: I have the informations about the Chinese Gods from a small book, introducing Chinese mythology to me and I love it. There are much more I might put into my 3 kingdoms stories, for example the God Hun Dun or Pan Gu. If Nü Chou is older than the Greek Gods I think this is a perfect example how old Chinese history is and no country ever can compare it's history and Gods to this glorious country. I really love it.
July 8, 2015
You are right. Chinafan. Most Chinese people don't know her. I haven't read the book 山海经, too. But I find the sentences about her in 山海经。女丑之尸,生而十日炙杀之。It is Chinese primitive mythology. She is even older than the Greek gods. We are more familiar with 三皇五帝。
July 5, 2015
@Alan: Nü Chou is the Chinese Goddess of the Dead. She was standing on a mountain to pay for the human sins and has been burned to death by the rising 10 suns. She died and became the Goddess of the Dead. And Nü Chou is a very famous person in the Beijing Opera. You can search for her on Baidu. My story is invented yes, but I think it is good to add something to her original story and to make her more evil and more powerful. Although some Chinese don't like it, at least they learn something about their Gods because I found out that many Chinese never heard of them.
July 5, 2015
Even now, I don't know who Nü Chou is. But I am sure that she is not a female clown of Peiking Opera. It is said that she is a goddess of death. Or maybe she is a witch from the monster book(山海经). This is a fantasy article, even hard to undersatnd for native Chineese. At least, I never heared about this stroy.
July 5, 2015
Nü Chou’s Realm Deep in the earth, under the Tian Shan Mountains, lies the realm of Nü Chou – The Goddess of the Dead. The entry leads through a labyrinth of dark caves, filled with deadly spear traps, falling doors and burning fires. At the end of this Hell trip the entry of the realm occurs. Stone walls 100 meters tall and filled with coffins. Undead wandering through the realm, filled with magic traps, never-dying fires and golden treasures the dead brought from their previous lives. All that goes forever down into the Earth lands here. 女丑的王国深埋地下,在天山之底,横卧着女丑,这个女死神的王国。入口是由黑暗洞穴组成的迷宫,里面充满了致命的长矛陷阱、机关门和燃烧的火焰。在这个地狱之路的尽头是王国的入口。100米高的石墙挂满了棺材。活死人(不死之人)在王国内游荡,里面充满了魔法陷阱,不灭之火(永恒之火)和亡者生前获得的金银珠宝。所有的这些在地下永存。
July 5, 2015
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