Revision / Opinion
Revision / Opinion

What have I been doing lately?

After I thought about going abroad to gain more experience more and to become more fluently in speaking English, I decided to go somewhere and to stay there for about a year. I've been running around so hard much, so I thought decided that I deserve to take a little break a little bit. Since my plan for going abroad as an exchange student failed, I just chose going to go to Austrailia for working holiday. My parents are worried about me because they think that I'll have a hard time there, and as I'll need to do everything by myself. To be honest, I don't think I've met any hardness major difficulties in my life yet; I only felt that it's tiring and boring to study hard in at university, and I tried hard* my best to get a good grades. I don't know what was my motivation was to study so hard diligently at that time, but I managed to get got a scholarship anyway. Not this time though...

I felt feel that it can be a really meaningless to study when I don't have any interests in the major what that I'm doing studying now. So, I thought think I need to take the some time off to think decide what I'm gonna going to do later, and I wanted to find the answer after by the time I graduate my university. Too many complex things...

Getting a good grade is important in Korean society. People are dreaming of going to big company and they're trying so hard to fulfill the qualifications to go there. and Getting good grades is just a little part of it, I guess. Some people are going abroad for volunteer just for to makeing their image seem nice. They want high English test scores, high Chinese test scores, advanced fluency of speaking English and Chinese, a high GPA, a well written self-introduction paper, abroad experiences, confident and nice conversation/presentation skills, ah and a nice and loyal attitude of course!

I'm also going to consider about these thoughts and those later when I come back from Austrailia, but I'm scared already scared.

What I have been doing lately.

After I thought about going abroad to experience more and be more fluent at speaking English, I decided to go somewhere and stay there about a year. I've been running so hard so I thought I deserve to take a break a little bit. Since my plan for going abroad as an exchange student failed, I just chose to go Austrailia for a working holiday. My parents are worried about me because they think I'll have a hard time there and I need to do everything by myself. To be honest, I don't think I've met any hardness in my life yet, I only felt that it's tiring and boring to study hard at university, and I tried hard to get a good grade. I don't know what was my motivation to study hard at that time, but I got a scholarship anyway. Not this time though...
I feel that it can be really meaningless to study when I don't have any interests in a specific major.

I think I need to take the time off to think what I'm gonna do later and wanted to find the answer after I graduate my university. Too many complex things..
Getting a good grade is important in Korean society. People are dreaming of going to big companies and they're trying so hard to fulfill the qualifications to go there. Getting good grades is just a little part of it I guess. Some people are going abroad to volunteer just to make their image nice. English test scores, Chinese test scores, Fluency of speaking English and Chinese, high GPA, well written self introduction paper, abroad experiences, confident and nice conversation/presentation skills, ah nice and loyal attitude of course!
I'm also going to consider these and those later when I come back from Austrailia, but I'm scared already.
ah what I have been doing lately! I thought that It would be nice if I have more skills to do something before I go to Austrailia, so I'm learning how to make coffee these days helping workers in a cafe and I tutor a middle school boy preparing for his tests.
I should find out more info about Austrailia and I will pack my things in a carrier~

Ah, what I have I been doing lately?! I thought that it would be nice if I have to develop more skills to do something before I go to Austrailia, so I'm learning to makeing coffee these days by helping workers in a cafe. and I also am tutoring a middle school boy to prepare for preparing his tests.

I should find out more info about Australia, and I will pack my stuffs in a carrier~

* You used the word 'hard' many times, so I just tried to give you alternative words.

(I had to submit the correction in 2 parts...)

What have I been doing lately.

After I thought about going abroad to experience more and be more fluently in speaking English, I decided to go somewhere and stay there about a year. I've been running so hard so I thought I deserve to take a break a little bit. Since my plan for going abroad as an exchange student failed, I just chose going to Austrailia for working holiday. my parents are worried about me because they think I'll have a hard time there and I need to do everything by myself. To be honest, I don't think I've met any hardness in my life yet, I only felt that it's tiring and boring to study hard at university, and I tried hard to get a good grade. I don't know what was my motivation to study hard at that time, but I got a scholarship anyway. not this time though... I think I should know how to weather the storm in life.
I felt that it can be a really meaningless study when I don't have any interests in major what I'm doing now.
I thought I need to take the time off to think what I'm gonna do later and wanted to find the answer after I graduate my university. too many complex things..
Getting a good grade is important in Korea society. People are dreaming of going to big company and they're trying so hard to fulfill the qualifications to go there. and getting good grades is just a little part of it I guess. Some poeple are going abroad for volunteer just for making their image nice. English test scores, Chinese test scores, Fluency of speaking English and Chinese, high GPA, well written self introduction paper, abroad experiences, confident and nice conversation/presentation skills, ah nice and loyal attitude of course!
I'm also going to consider about these and those later when I come back from Austrailia, but I'm scared already.
ah what I have been doing lately! I thought that It would be nice if I have more skills to do something before I go to Austrailia, so I'm learning making coffee these days helping works in a cafe and I tutor a middle school boy for preparing his tests.
I should find out more info about Austrailia and I will pack my stuffs in a carrier~