Emma
Snowman There was a popular song named SNOWMAN several years in China. The song tells us a story that snowman feels like falling in love with someone.The snowman waited and waited, till the spring comes. "How cold it is!" it is said by the snowman and by its inner heart. "Merry Christmas to you!" It is a greeting and best wishes from the snowman to its lover. But in the end, the winter pasts and the spring comes.
Jul 2, 2015 6:53 AM
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Snowman

There was a popular song named called SNOWMAN several years in China. The song tells us a story that about a snowman who 1* feels like falling in love with someone.The snowman waited and waited, till the spring comes came2*. "How cold it is!" it is said by the snowman and by from its his3* inner heart. "Merry Christmas to you!" It is a greeting and best wishes from the snowman to its his lover. But in the end, the winter pasts passes and the spring comes.

 

1* or - a story in which a snowman feels like....

2* you can tell the story in presetn but more usual in past and if you start in the past you have to continue in the past.

3* a snowman is an object but because you give it a personality it is better to use the male pronoun.

July 8, 2015
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