Summer Hello everybody! My name is Jose. I´m from Spain and today I would like to write about what I think about summer. In the first place, I can say I like summer because you can go to the beach o

José

Summer Hello everybody! My name is Jose. I´m from Spain and today I would like to write about what I think about summer. In the first place, I can say I like summer because you can go to the beach or to the mountain, you usually have more free time or simply because it is easier to relax. Secondly, when I was a child, I used to go to the beach with my brothers, my sisters and my cousins and I used to be with them a lot of time and we enjoyed much together. In addition, I must say for many people , summer is unconfortable time because the weather is hotter than in winter, above all where I live. Many times, the temperatures are very hights. But anyway, I think summer has got more advantages than disadvantages. For that reason, I celebrate summer has come! Regards! *I´m sorry for my mistakes, I am learning English… if someone can correct it to me, thanks a lot!

Jul 2, 2015 8:39 AM

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Summer

Hello everybody!
My name is Jose. I´m from Spain and today I would like to write about what I think about summer.
In the first place, I can say I like summer because you can go to the beach or to the mountain, you usually have more free time or simply because it is easier to relax.
Secondly, when I was a child, I used to go to the beach with my brothers, my sisters and my cousins and I used to be with them a lot of time and we enjoyed much together.*

*and together, we enjoyed ourselves a lot. (I think this is what you mean)

In addition, I must say for many people , summer is an uncomfortable time because the weather is hotter than in winter, above all where I live. Many times, the temperatures are very high(ts).
But anyway, I think summer has got more advantages than disadvantages. For that reason, I celebrate that summer has come!

Regards!
*I´m sorry for my mistakes, I am learning English… if someone can correct it to for me, thanks a lot!

Well done, José. A great piece of writing about the summer.

Leigh

July 2, 2015

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