juan castro
I don´t feel ok.
Today has been a hard day because I have headache, all my body hurts and really I don´t want to do anything. My old brother told me I have to rest and take medications suggest to improve my health, so I´m trying to rest to be better as soon as possible. I think if I take into account the suggestion of my family, I´ll get well, that´s what I want.
Jul 2, 2015 4:06 PM
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I don´t feel ok/good/well
Today has been a hard day because I have a headache, all my body hurts and I really I don't want to do anything. My older brother told me that I have to rest and take medications suggest medicine that is supposed to improve my health, so I'm trying to rest to be get better as soon as possible. I think if I take my family's suggestions into account the suggestion of my family, I'll get well, that's what I want.
Just needes a little editing to sound more natural.
July 2, 2015
Thank you Tavia, so, my entrance is well written?
July 2, 2015
Yes, take your medicine and try to get some rest. Hope you feel better soon!
July 2, 2015
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