Hello people! Good evening! I have to write a bit every day, so today I whant to tell you something about me and my history. I have some problems with past forms, so I try to write in past! Sorry

Rubén F

Hello people! Good evening! I have to write a bit every day, so today I whant to tell you something about me and my history. I have some problems with past forms, so I try to write in past! Sorry if I get you cracy. I was borned in Barcelona at 1982, the year of the Spanish soccer world cup. I born in November, so I didn't remember who wons the cup. Google says that was Italy who win. When I was a child, I sudy on a private school, because my father and my mother works on the public one of the city, and they don't whant the other people thinks I have some privileges. So my fathers pays the private school, (¿haciendo un gran esfuerzo? working hard?) They works hard for I can study and grow up as the man I am today! At school I knew many friends, two of them today are lawyers. And another is a police sargent. This one, when he was a child, was the baddest of the class. He fights with another mates, and often with teachers too.All mates thinks that when he grows up, he finish on prission. Its a surprise than today he becomes a police officer! Thanks for your help!

Jul 2, 2015 4:09 PM

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Hi Rubén,

Great posting! I have made some suggestions below. I hope they are useful to you.

Keep writing. You have reminded me to write another posting in German :)

¡Buena suerte!

I have to write a bit every day, so today I want to tell you something about me and my history.
I have some problems with past forms, so I try to write in the past! Sorry if I make you crazy. 

I was born in Barcelona in 1982, the year of the Spanish soccer World Cup. I was born in November, so I don't remember who won the cup. Google says that it was Italy who won.

When I was a child, I studied at a private school,

because my father and my mother works on the public one of the city? for the local council?

and they didn't want the other people to think I had any special privileges.
So my father paid for a private school. My parents worked hard so I could study and grow up to be the man I am today!

At school I had many friends, two of them today are lawyers. And another is a police sergeant. This one, when he was a child, was the worst-behaved of the class. He fought with my other mates, and often with teachers too. All my mates thought that he would end up in prison. It's a surprise then, that today he is a police officer!

Thanks for your help!

July 2, 2015

Yes of course! In summer there are too many foreigners on Spanish beaches!! I can practice with them!! And with the tablet, I can write everywhere! hehehe. Thanks!

July 3, 2015

Working on the beach? Now there's a dedicated student! :-)

July 3, 2015

Hello people!

Good evening!

I have to write abit every day, so today I want to tell you something about myself and my background. (para mí sueno mejor)

I have some problems with the past tense, so I am trying to it write in past. Sorry if I make you crazy.

I was born in Barcelona in November of 1982, the year of the Spanish Soccer World Cup, and I don't,remember who won the cup, however, Google stated that it was Italy.

When I was a child, I studied in a private school, however, my father and my mother worked in a public school in the city, they didn't want others to know that I had certain privileges.

My father paid for the private school, both my parents worked hard to send me to this school. I studied hard and grew up to become the man I am today. (hacerse un buen hombre de hoy)

At school, I had many friends, two of them today are now lawyers. Another friend became a police sergeant. When he was a child, he was the baddest of the class. He fights with another students, and often with teachers too. All men think like that. when he grows up, he finish in prison. It surprises me today, that he is a police officer!