help me! please I want to know if this well written... when I was about two years, a cousin of my mother played with me every day, died in a traffic accident five days later, my mom was pla

paola gutierrez

help me! please I want to know if this well written... when I was about two years, a cousin of my mother played with me every day, died in a traffic accident five days later, my mom was playing with me and she left me single in the room, ten minutes after, when she came she hear me speak, as if talking to someone else, she was scared and approached me and asked with whom I was talking, then I told him that with mario who is the cousin of my mother, she was scared, and me out of the room, when we were leaving I said bye mario, after a while my mother was calm and thought that mario was saying goodbye to me.

Jul 3, 2015 2:40 AM

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help me! please

I want to know if this well written...

when I was about two years old,
a cousin of my mother used to play with me every day,
then he died in a traffic accident five days later.
(Specify the time here- A day later, A week later,) my mom was playing with me and she left me single alone in the room.
Ten minutes after later,
when she came back she heard me speak,
as if I was talking to someone else.
She was scared and approached me and asked with whom I was talking,
then I told her that I was speaking with Mario, who is the cousin of my mother,
she was scared, and (brought?) me out of the room.
when While we were leaving I said bye Mario,
after a while my mother was calm,
and (she or I? Specify the subject) thought that Mario was saying goodbye to me.