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TodayNotes: Random Sentences 지금은 제가 집에 혼자있어요. 내 엄마와 아빠가 할머니 집에과요. (Now I'm alone at home. My mom and dad go to Grandmother house) 야, 어디에요? 스카이프로 오브라인 왜요? 당신은 너무 바쁜요? (Hey, where are you? Why your skype offline? Really busy?) 나는 지금 배고파요. 점심 먹어십어요. 하지만 제가 점심 먹어 안있어요. 라마단 때문에. (Now I feel hungry. I want to lunch. But, I can't lunch. Because the Ramadhan.) 내 핸드폰이 부선진을. 나는 너무 슬퍼요. (My handphone broken. I'm really sad.) 어제 제가 떡볶이가 먹어요. 우와~ 맛있어요! 인도네시아 맛있어 음식을, 칠록 이라고. (Yesterday, I'm eating tteobokki. Wow~ Delicious! The taste like a Indonesian food. The name, cilok.)
Jul 4, 2015 4:50 AM
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TodayNotes: Random Sentences

지금은 제가 집에 혼자있어요. 내 엄마와 아빠가 할머니 집에 요.
(Now I'm alone at home. My mom and dad go to Grandmother house) 

야, 어디에요? 스카이프로 오브라인 왜요? 당신은 너무 바쁜요?
(Hey, where are you? Why your skype offline? Really busy?)

야, 어디야? or "어디에요?"

It's tricky part for foreigners learning Korean.

"야" is informal. "어디에요" is formal. You don't want to use them together unless you humor your close friend. Then, it's okay.

스카이프 왜 오프라인이에요? 너무 바빠요? (In spoken language, you don't have to add "당신은". In Korean language, it has different usage than English word "you".)

 
나는 지금 배고파요. 점심 먹어십고싶어요. 하지만 제가 점심 먹어 안있 안 먹었어요. 라마단 때문에.
(Now I feel hungry. I want to lunch. But, I can't lunch. Because the Ramadhan.)

내 핸드폰이 부선진을부서져서 나는 너무 슬퍼요.
(My handphone broken. I'm really sad.)

어제 제가 떡볶이가 먹어요. 우와~ 맛있어요! 인도네시아 맛있어 음식을, 칠록 이라고.
(Yesterday, I'm eating tteobokki. Wow~ Delicious! The taste like a Indonesian food. The name, cilok.)

어제 제가 떡볶이를 먹었어요. ("어제" is past tense, the verb "먹다" conjugates as past form.)

"우와~ 맛있어요!" is very good! sounds very natural. good job!

칠록이라는 인도네시아 음식하고 비슷한 맛이에요.

 

Your original writing was still understandable. If you're aiming for perfection, I'd be glad if I helped you a little. BTW, I'm curious about "cilok". Good luck!

 

July 4, 2015
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