Could someone correct this essay? It’s obvious that world is changing and it’s obvious that men are blame for this situation. Long time ago, scientists already said that climate was going to change if

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Could someone correct this essay? It’s obvious that world is changing and it’s obvious that men are blame for this situation. Long time ago, scientists already said that climate was going to change if governments weren’t aware about CO2 emissions but nobody heard them. As a result of this, the hole in the Ozono layer is getting bigger and bigger and the planet is getting warmer due to the greenhouse effect. Nowadays not seems to be a problem for the mankind but will be a very serious problem for our offspring. It’s quite selfish, but it’s a reality. Governments make international meetings about environment and there, the set lots of laws in favour of this issue and set high fines for those countries that not carry out these plans, but countries prefer pay a fine that reduce its emissions. Greenpeace is the only one that understand the terrible global situation and everybody should support them. Families should recycle at home and look after the nearby environment. We must look after the world because it’s our home.

Jul 4, 2015 11:50 AM

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Could someone correct this essay?

It’s obvious that the world is changing and it’s obvious that men people ("Men" makes it sound like male people specifically are to blame, rather than mankind as a whole.) are blame for this situation. A long time ago, scientists already said that the climate was going to change if governments weren’t aware about CO2 emissions but nobody heard them. As a result of this, the hole in the Ozone layer is getting bigger and bigger and the planet is getting warmer due to the greenhouse effect. Nowadays (Consider using "Today" instead of "Nowadays." "Nowadays" is very informal for an essay.) it does not seem to be a problem for the mankind but it will be a very serious problem for our offspring. It’s quite selfish, but it’s a reality. Governments make hold international meetings about the environment and there, they set lots of laws in favour of this issue and set high fines for those countries that do not carry out these plans, but countries prefer to pay a fine that rather than reduce its their emissions. Greenpeace is the only one that understands the terrible global situation and everybody should support them. Families should recycle at home and look after the nearby environment. We must look after the world because it’s our home.