Luis Esteban
thanks Itlaki :D I've never wrote a large paragraph here, this is my first one. I made an account in Italki because of I have to improve my English since I'm physicist and on August 21st I going to travel to Servia to give a speach about my research. It has elapsed like 1 month, from I made login in this webpage and I'd like to tell you that I feel that my English has improved a lot. Thanks to the Italki community for by nice with me, I met really nice persons here and some of them are more than languish partners for me, them became my friends and I really thankful for met them. I hope continue improving my English and meeting new wonderful persons.
Jul 5, 2015 7:01 PM
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thanks Itlaki :D

I've never wrote a large paragraph here, this is my first one. I made an account in Italki because of I have to improve my English since I'm physicist and on August 21st I going to travel to Servia to give a speach about my research. It has elapsed like 1 month, from I made login in this webpage and I'd like to tell you that I feel that my English has improved a lot. Thanks to the Italki community for by nice with me, I met really nice persons here and some of them are more than languish partners for me, them became my friends and I really thankful for met them. I hope continue improving my English and meeting new wonderful persons.

 

I would correct it something like this...

I have never written a long paragraph on Italki, this is my first one. I made an account with Italki because I need to improve my English since I am a physicist. On August 21st, I will be traveling to Servia to give a speach in English about my research. It has been one month since I first logged on to this webpage, I would like to tell you that I feel that my English has improved greatly. Thanks to the Italki community for being nice to me, I have met many nice people and some of them are more than language partners for me, they have become my friends and I am really thankful for them. I hope to continue to improve my English and meet new wonderful people.

 

 

July 12, 2015
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thanks Itlaki :D

I've never wrote [WRITTEN] a large paragraph here, this is my first one. I made an account in Italki because of I have to improve my English since I'm [a] physicist


*<em>Here you have confused "because of" and "because". "Because of" is always followed by a noun or a pronoun; for example, "I stayed home BECAUSE OF the rain." "Because" is always followed by a clause with a verb; for example, "I stayed home BECAUSE it was raining." </em>


and on August 21st I [am] going to travel to Servia to give a speach about my research. It has elapsed like 1 month [About one month has elapsed/It has been about a month],


*<em>If you want to use the word "elapse", you have to make the amount of time the subject of the verb. For example: "One week has elapsed since . . ." You cannot say "it has elapsed one week", but you CAN say "If has BEEN one work since . . ."</em>


from [since] I made login in [made an account on] this webpage and I'd like to tell you that I feel that my English has improved a lot.


<em>*I am not sure exactly what you want to say here. You can "log in" to a website once you are a member, and you can "make an account" in order to become a member. Here I think you mean that you made an account a month ago.</em>


Thanks to the Italki community for by [being] nice with [to] me, I [have] met really nice persons [people] here and some of them are more than languish [language] partners for me, them became [they have become] my friends and I [am] really thankful for [that I] met them. I hope [to] continue improving my English and meeting new wonderful persons [people].

 

<em>if you have any questions about my corrections please let me know.</em>

July 5, 2015
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