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Hi everybody! I'm an italian girl but i love english and i want to learn everything about it. I'm here because i'd like know new people and talk to them. Now in Italy is very very hot (like in Spain ufff :D). In fact, I can't sleep well (me neither :(). I try to write something about me. I'm 17 years old and i was born on 30 march 1998. This year i've started artistic gymnastic ( i did it when i was 11 too..) and i like a lot. In my free time i see my friends and i laugh very much with them. I like electronic music, rap but i love the piano too. I think Einaudi is a brilliant player. If someone want to talk to me , i'd like it .I could help you in italian too :a

You write very good to be so young :) I'd like improving my Italian too, I have forgotten it a lot :D

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Hi everybody! I'm Italian but I love English and I want to learn everything about it. I'm here because I'd like know to meet new people and talk with them. Right now in Italy it is very very hot. In fact I can't sleep well. I will try to write something about me. I'm 17 years old and I was born on 30 March 1998. This year I've (<em>or:</em> I) started artistic gymnastics (I did it when I was 11 too.) and I like it enough. In my free time I see my friends and with them I laugh very much. I like electronic music, rap but I love the piano too. I think Einaudi is a brilliant piano player. If someone wants (<em>or:</em> would like) to talk with me, I'd like it/that. I can help you in (<em>or:</em> with) Italian too. :a

Brava, Virginia!

Note that I changed "player" to "piano player." You can also say "pianist." But if you only say "player," I do not know if you mean "guitar plater" or "football player", etc.

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Hi everybody! I'm Italian but I love English and I want to learn everything about it. I'm here because I'd like too get to know new people and talk with them. Now In Italy is very very hot right now. In fact, I can't sleep well. I'm trying to write something about me. I'm 17 years old and I was born on March 30th, 1998. This year I've started artistic gymnastics ( I did it when I was 11 too..) and I like enough (I don't think you meant to you this word. It sounds likeyou like it just barely, so that's why you do it. Maybe that's true, but I'm not sure.) In my free time, I go to see my friends and with them I laugh very much when I'm with them. I like electronic music and rap, but I love the piano too. I think Einaudi is a brilliant player/pianist. If someone wants to talk with me, I'd like that. I can help you in/with italian too :a

Languages are always capitalized (English, Italian, etc) and when " I " stands alone, it is also capitalized. (I, I'd, I'm, etc). 

The words with " / " are ones that I thought might sound better with the word I provided, but yours was not wrong. 

Besides all that, great entry! I hope that you can find a way to beat the heat! >_<