我昨天的做(我昨天做的事）
我今天早上八点起床。然后我刷呀，淋浴。我昨晚（做完）了以后去楼下吃早饭。我起（骑）自行车来我的工作。我工作从九点到七点， 然后回家做晚饭。我然后（然后我）看电视，看一部分书，看报. 我就去上楼睡觉。
(Today I woke up at 8. Then I brushed my teeth and took a shower. When I finished I went downstairs to eat breakfast. I rode my bike to work. I worked from 9 to 7 then went back home to make dinner. Then I watched TV, read part of a book, and read the newspaper. Finally I went upstairs and went to bed.)
我昨天的做了什么
我今天早上八点起床。然后我刷呀牙，淋浴（洗澡、冲凉，more accurate）。我昨晚做完了以后，去楼下吃早饭。我起骑自行车来我的工作去上班。我工作从早上九点到晚上七点， 然后回家做晚饭。我然后看电视，看一部分些书，看报. 我就去上楼睡觉了。
(Today I woke up at 8. Then I brushed my teeth and took a shower. When I finished I went downstairs to eat breakfast. I rode my bike to work. I worked from 9 to 7 then went back home to make dinner. Then I watched TV, read part of a book, and read the newspaper. Finally I went upstairs and went to bed.)
我昨天的做（做的事儿）
我今天早上八点起床。然后我刷呀（牙），淋浴。我昨晚（做完）了以后去楼下吃早饭。我起（骑）自行车来我的（去）工作。我工作从九点（从九点工作）到七点， 然后回家做晚饭。我然后（然后我）看电视，看一部分（些）书，看报. （最后）我就去上楼（去）睡觉。
(Today I woke up at 8. Then I brushed my teeth and took a shower. When I finished I went downstairs to eat breakfast. I rode my bike to work. I worked from 9 to 7 then went back home to make dinner. Then I watched TV, read part of a book, and read the newspaper. Finally I went upstairs and went to bed.)
我昨天做的事儿
我昨天早上八点起床，然后我刷牙、淋浴。我做完了以后去楼下吃早饭。我骑自行车去工作。我从九点工作到七点，然后回家做晚饭。接着，我看了会电视，又看一些书和报纸。 最后，我上楼去睡觉。
(Today I woke up at 8. Then I brushed my teeth and took a shower. When I finished I went downstairs to eat breakfast. I rode my bike to work. I worked from 9 to 7 then went back home to make dinner. Then I watched TV, read part of a book, and read the newspaper. Finally I went upstairs and went to bed.)
Given that this English version is written by a native English speaker, I would copy this bilingual text as my translation model.:) Simon-pure English!
1:然后=接着、接下来、之后、过了会儿
2:Please use '、' for listing things, not '，'.
GOOD JOB!
我昨天做的事儿
我今天早上八点起床(woke up实际只是醒来的意思，而不是起床)。然后我开始刷牙，冲淋浴。我做完了这些以后去楼下下楼吃早饭。我骑自行车去工作。我从九点工作到七点工作 ， 然后回家做晚饭。然后我看电视，看一些点书，看报纸. 最后我上楼去睡觉。
(Today I woke up at 8. Then I brushed my teeth and took a shower. When I finished I went downstairs to eat breakfast. I rode my bike to work. I worked from 9 to 7 then went back home to make dinner. Then I watched TV, read part of a book, and read the newspaper. Finally I went upstairs and went to bed.)
