Arthur 王昊烨
150706 一篇日记: 我新的爱好 你好朋友们, 我今天要告诉你们关于我的新的爱好:跑步。 我明年打算跟一些朋友们在一个有点儿难叫 “Marathon des Sables” 的竞赛一起跑步。 在 “MDS” 我们有6天为了在撒哈拉大沙漠跑步大概241公里. 在第4个天对手们得跑步80公里。有人说它是最难的世界的竞赛! 我小时候总是爱大生物不过可惜最近我没很锻炼!3个星期以前我开始了我的训练和我发现了我很喜欢跑步! 现在我发现散步只20公里特别难不过我知道跟努力一切皆有可能! haha. 我对你们的爱好非常有兴趣!你们在周末怎么玩儿? 谢谢和再见! 亚瑟 *** Hello friends, Today I want to tell you about my new hobby: running. Next year I and a few friends are planning to run a race called the "Marathon des Sables" together. In the "MDS" we have 6 days to run about 241km through the Sahara desert. On the fourth day alone we have to run 80km. Some people say it's the hardest race in the world! Since I was small I've always loved sport but recently I haven't exercised very much! Three weeks ago I began my training and discovered that I love running! At the moment I find running 20km extremely difficult but I know that with hard work anything is possible! haha. I'm super interested in your hobbies. How do you enjoy your weekends? Thank you and see you! Arthur
Jul 6, 2015 3:46 AM
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150706 一篇日记: 我的新爱好

你好,朋友们,

我今天要告诉你们关于我的新爱好:跑步。

打算明年跟一些朋友参加一个有点儿难叫 “Marathon des Sables” 的竞赛一起跑步。 


在 “MDS” ,我们为了在撒哈拉大沙漠跑6天,全程大概241公里. 在第4天对手们得跑步80公里。有人说它是最难的世界竞赛! 


我小时候总是爱大生物很爱运动,不过可惜最近我没怎么锻炼!3个星期以前我开始了我的训练,我发现我很喜欢跑步!

现在我发现散步只跑步20公里特别难不过我知道只要努力一切皆有可能! haha.

我对你们的爱好非常兴趣!你们在周末怎么玩儿?

谢谢和再见!

亚瑟

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Hello friends,

Today I want to tell you about my new hobby: running.

Next year I and a few friends are planning to run a race called the "Marathon des Sables" together.

In the "MDS" we have 6 days to run about 241km through the Sahara desert. On the fourth day alone we have to run 80km. Some people say it's the hardest race in the world!

Since I was small I've always loved sport but recently I haven't exercised very much! Three weeks ago I began my training and discovered that I love running!

At the moment I find running 20km extremely difficult but I know that with hard work anything is possible! haha.

I'm super interested in your hobbies. How do you enjoy your weekends?

Thank you and see you!

Arthur

July 6, 2015
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150706 一篇日记: 我新的爱好

你好,朋友们: 

我今天要告诉你们关于我的新的爱好:跑步。

我明年打算跟一些朋友们在一个有点儿(/挑战), 叫 “Marathon des Sables” 的竞赛中,一起跑步。

在 “MDS” 中, 我们要在6天为了跑(步)大概241公里通过撒哈拉大沙漠。 (光是)在第4个天手们得跑(步)80公里。有人说它是<em>世界上</em>最难的竞赛!

我小时候总是爱大生物运动, 不过可惜最近我没锻炼!3个星期以前我开始了我的训练, 并且我发现了我很喜欢跑步!

现在(/此时)我发现步仅20公里特别难(/十分困难); 不过我知道努力下,一切皆有可能! haha.

我对你们的爱好非常有兴趣!你们在周末怎么玩儿?

谢谢和再见!

亚瑟

*** You should notice the punctuation that will affect the meaning in a sentence. For example, "有点儿难叫(的)~" without any punctuation means something (the race) a little bit hard to call. But if it's the way I did, "有点儿(困)难, 叫(做)~的" means the race has challenge and is called ~. On the other hand, your English and Chinese don't somewhat match so it's difficult to make my choice of the words and expressions. 


 
 

July 6, 2015
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150706 一篇日记: 我新的爱好

你好朋友们,

我今天要告诉你们关于我的新的爱好:跑步。

我明年打算跟一些朋友们在一个有点儿难参加一个叫 “Marathon des Sables” 的竞赛一起跑步。

在 “MDS” 我们有6天为了在撒哈拉大沙漠跑步大概241公里. 在第4对手们每个人得跑步80公里。有人说它是最难的世界的竞赛!

我小时候总是爱大生物运动不过可惜最近我没很锻炼!3个星期以前我开始了我的训练并且我发现了我很喜欢跑步!

现在我发现散步跑步20公里特别难,不过我知道只要努力一切皆有可能! haha.

我对你们的爱好非常有兴趣!你们平时周末怎么玩儿?

谢谢和再见!

亚瑟

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Hello friends,

Today I want to tell you about my new hobby: running.

Next year I and a few friends are planning to run a race called the "Marathon des Sables" together.

In the "MDS" we have 6 days to run about 241km through the Sahara desert. On the fourth day alone we have to run 80km. Some people say it's the hardest race in the world!

Since I was small I've always loved sport but recently I haven't exercised very much! Three weeks ago I began my training and discovered that I love running!

At the moment I find running 20km extremely difficult but I know that with hard work anything is possible! haha.

I'm super interested in your hobbies. How do you enjoy your weekends?

Thank you and see you!

Arthur

July 6, 2015
我最近也刚开始尝试慢跑,但总是用不好气总是感到累。你有什么慢跑的好方法分享一下嘛亚瑟(≧∇≦)
July 6, 2015
哈哈。谢谢 drowen!我也很自环球类运动。亚瑟
July 6, 2015
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