Marina
“The Internet” “The Internet” As of today, the Internet help me in my daily life in all ways. First, when I get out of the bed, I read my emails and watch my social networking sites while I drink a cup of coffee. Then, at work, I used to use it to contact with clients and send documents to my workmates that they are in other cities or ever in my office if it´s necessary. Later, in my house, I sometimes check my banking accounts, I do shop online, paying bills, listenin to music, downloading films, series and books, getting information to study English and I am all time connected to Whatsapp to talk with my friends and family, planning activities to do in our free time.
Jul 6, 2015 10:03 AM
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“The Internet”

“The Internet”
As of today, Currently/Nowadays the Internet helps me in many ways throughout my daily life. in all ways. First, when From the time that I get out of the bed, I begin to read my emails and look at watch my social networking sites while I drink a cup of coffee. Then, Later at work, I used to use it to contact with clients and send documents to my workmates who may be that they are in other cities or even right in my office if it´s necessary.
Later, When I return home, in my house, I sometimes check my banking accounts, I do online shopping online, paying bills, listenin to music, downloading films, TV series or and books and getting information to help me study English. and I am all time also connected at all times to Whatsapp so that I can to talk with my friends and family which helps us in planning activities to do in our free time.

Well done Marina!  Most of my changes simply make your composition sound more natural to a native speaker.  Keep up your good work!

July 6, 2015
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“The Internet”

“The Internet”
As of today, the Internet help me in my daily life in all ways. First, when I get out of the bed, I read my emails and watch my social networking sites while I drink a cup of coffee. Then, at work, I used to use it to contact with clients and send documents to my workmates that they are in other cities or ever in my office if it´s necessary.
Later, in my house, I sometimes check my banking accounts, I do shop online, paying bills, listenin to music, downloading films, series and books, getting information to study English and I am all time connected to Whatsapp to talk with my friends and family, planning activities to do in our free time.

 

As of today, the internet helps me in my daily life in every way. First, when I get out of bed, I read my emails and look at my social networking sites while I drink a cup of coffee.  Then, at work, I used to use it to contact clients and send documents to my workmates that are in other cities or even in my office if it's necessary. ["used to use it" implies you are no longer doing this]

Later, in my house, I sometimes check my banking accounts, I do shop online, pay bills, listen to music, download films, series and books, get information to study English, and I am always connected to Whatsapp to talk with my friends and family, planning activities to do in our free time.


The last sentence needs some breaks after each thought - but your meaning is clear.  When we make a list of things using the comma to separate them, it is good to use a consistent verb form for each item in the list: I check, I shop, I pay, I listen, I download, I get information, etc.    Your English is quite good!

July 6, 2015
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