Sherry
go for love This is not a recent news. An actor named Wen Zhang who have married but fell love with another woman named Yao Di, and it led to a thinking for me, that is, how we could define what love is. As we all know, love is the base of marriage, and love includes responsibility, moral, trust, honesty, etc. Many people can go dead for love in TV series. Love is a great emotion, but how about the adultery due to love? It seemed that Wen Zhang and Yao Di loved each other deeply at least from the news picture we have seen. The married people should lose the chance to love with others in reality. However, to be honest, I'd like to show sympathy for them since people always have rights to love whom they really love. Go for love and just for love.
Jul 6, 2015 11:52 AM
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gGo for love

This is not a recent news. An actor named Wen Zhang who have was [1] married but fell love with another woman named Yao Di, and. It [2] led to a thinking thought for me, that is, how we could define what love is.? [3] As we all know, love is the base basis of marriage, and love includes responsibility, morality, trust, honesty, etc. Many people can go dead for love [4] in TV series. Love is a great emotion, but how about the adultery due to love? It seemed that Wen Zhang and Yao Di loved each other deeply, at least from the news picture we have seen. The Married people should lose the chance to love with others in reality [5]. However, to be honest, I'd like to show sympathy for them since people always have rights the right to love whom they really love. Go for love and just for love.

 

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[1] The following sentence has correct grammar:

-- "An actor named Wen Zhang, who had married, fell in love with another woman named Yao Di."

 

However, a native speaker will say:

-- "An actor named Wen Zhang was married but fell in love with another woman named Yao Di."

 

[2] Because you are starting a new idea, you would start a new sentence.

 

[3] A native speaker will use a simpler sentence:

-- "It lead me to think about what we mean by love."

 

[4] I don't understand what this expression means.

 

[5] It would be okay to have "in reality" at the start of your sentence:

-- "In reality, married people should lose the chance to love others."

 

To have "in reality" at the end of the sentence was not wrong, but was unnatural.

 

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Great job! Except for one phrase ("go dead for love"), everything you wrote was easy to understand.

July 19, 2015
I agree with you, but things happen without intention, so it is hard to identify who is right and who is wrong some time. ^O^
July 31, 2015
Imagine if your husband were “deeply loving” another woman, how would you feel and what would you do? Would you still sympathy for them? In my opinion, if a person got married, he or she has no right to love another opposite sex.
July 20, 2015
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