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How i elapsed my day.(Please correct my mistake) I woke up early in morning at 8' o clock. I had my breakfast. When I turned on my laptop, and sign in to face book, I heard a very sad new. My one of face book friend has passed. I can't believe, but this is reality. Her family told us that she was sugar patient, when they took her to hospital, doctors injected the drip, due to which her sugar level goes to 600 and she went in comma. And today she left this world. I was very upset. Then I went to market and bought a new dress for my sister-in-law. It is in red color, and my sis-in-law liked it a lot. I had to purchase bangles, but I didn't get it. I will go to market, in few days and will buy new bangles. Now we have to take dinner, but my brother is outside home. We are waiting for him. I hope he will come soon and we will have our dinner. I am feeling hungry.
Jul 6, 2015 3:48 PM
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How i elapsed my day.(Please correct my mistake)

I woke up early in morning at 8' o clock. I had my breakfast. When I turned on my laptop, and sign in to Facebook, I heard a very sad new. One of my Facebook friends has passed. I can't believe, but this is reality. Her family told us that she was sugar patient, when they took her to hospital, doctors injected the drip, due to which her sugar level goes to 600, she went in comma. 

July 7, 2015

How I elapsed my day.(Please correct my mistake)

I woke up early in morning at 8' o clock. I had my breakfast. When I turned on my laptop, I signed into face book, I heard very sad news. My one of face book friends has passed. I can't believe it, but this is reality. Her family told us that she was a sugar patient, when they took her to the hospital, doctors injected the drip, and her sugar level went to 600. She went in comma, and today she left this world. I was very upset. Then I went to the market and bought a new dress for my sister-in-law. It is in red color, and my sis-in-law liked it a lot. I had to purchase bangles, but I didn't get it. I will go to the market in few days, and I will buy new bangles. Now we have to have dinner, but my brother is outside our home. We are waiting for him. I hope he will come soon and we will have our dinner. I am feeling hungry.

July 6, 2015
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