Alison
How Do I Think the Taipei? I like to live in Taipei because of these reasons. First of all, Taipei is an modern city with beautiful scenery. Secondly, Taipei has so conventient public transportation system and high-speed railway. Most improtant of all, this city offer people many entertainment activities. Therefore, I think that this city make people feel convenient, comfortable and interesting life.
Jul 7, 2015 2:50 AM
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What Do I Think of Taipei?

I like to live living in Taipei because of these reasons. You can also say: "for the following reasons:" as it sounds more natural.
First of all, Taipei is a modern city with a beautiful scenery.
Secondly, Taipei has a very convenient public transportation system and a high-speed railway.
Most important of all, this city offers people many entertainment activities.
Therefore, I think that this city is comfortable and convenient for people and interesting to live in.

 

There is nothing grammatically wrong with "this city makes people feel convenient", but "convenient" is not used as a feeling.

I also changed the last sentence a bit to make it flow better.

July 7, 2015
I would like to live in Taipei because of the following reasons. First of all, Taipei is a modern city with beautiful Nature around it. Secondly, Taipei has a convenient public transportation system.( and high-speed railway). Most important of all, The city offer people with many entertainment activities. Therefore, I think that Taipei makes people feel convenient,comfortable and interesting. Corrections are most welcome(if I did any). Cheers!! Boni
July 7, 2015
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