Aparicio Bezerra
My work I work with design of process plant,my specialty is Piping,Stairs,platforms,ladders and Equipments Statics,I use softwares of modeling 3D,I'm student of mechanical engineer, next year I will to Europe for learn about mechanical projects to plants of pulp and paper.
Jul 7, 2015 3:12 PM
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My Work

I work with in the design of process plants. My specialty is piping, stairs, platforms, ladders and Equipments Statics housing design {or component design/packaging}. I use softwares of for modeling 3D. I'm a mechanical engineering student of mechanical engineer,Next year, I will go/travel to Europe for to learn about the mechanical projects processes to plants of pulp and of paper mills.

 

Please make sure that you add a space after a comma. It reads quite lazy without one.

 

Also, don't just keep using commas for pauses. Start a new sentence with each new idea and avoid writing one long, rambling, run-on sentence.

July 7, 2015
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