italki - Writing Test - Example 3 - The Teacher When the teacher walked into the room we were very surprised

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Writing Test - Example 3 - The Teacher When the teacher walked into the room we were very surprised at his appearance. His face was very pale, his trousers were dirty and his shirt was torned. During some minutes nobody told anything. Everyone wanted to ask him why he was so quiet. Our teacher was always smiling and laughing. Then, suddenly, I remembered that the last day, he left the class quickly because he recived a call. After that, he didn`t come back and the school's director told us the class had finished. I wanted to say anything but I didn`t know what...It was not necessary, his eyes starting to cry. "Guys, I have some bad news, I have to leave the school. Yesterday, I had a traffic accidente with my car. My family is at the hospital and I have not sleep sometime last night. I must to look after them" I would have liked to finish the course but I have other priority...

Jul 7, 2015 5:31 PM

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Writing Test - Example 3 - The Teacher

When the teacher walked into the room, we were very surprised at his appearance. His face was very pale, his trousers were dirty, and his shirt was torn.

For a few minutes nobody said anything. Everyone wanted to ask him why he was so quiet. Our teacher was always smiling and laughing.

Then, suddenly, I remembered that yesterday, he left the class quickly because he received a call. After that, he didn't come back and the school's director told us the class had finished.

I wanted to say something but I didn't know what... It was not necessary, he started to cry.

"Guys, I have some bad news, I have to leave the school. Yesterday, I had a traffic accident with my car. My family is at the hospital and I did not get any sleep sometime last night. I must to look after them.

I would have liked to finish the course but I have other priorities…"

July 7, 2015

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