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What are you looking for on italki?
Someone asked me like that.
First At first i hated English! That's my afraid of. [what do you mean here? Do you mean that at first you were afraid of English?]
One day someone on Facebook was showed told me about italki
..hmmmm...how did I feel? I feel excite. felt excited
But when now that i reached it and visited to alls...ohh my feel is bore now. I feel bored now
It's too different as from what hes he showed me on fb.
it Seems everyone just contacts with handsome guys or only hot girls????.
I think so.... hmmmm...it's really too difficult.
But i was saw a few best good ones also.who are very kind????. Thanks for your kindness. Your You make me feel better.
Now, i must to fight with my afraid????????????????????????. fear
I shall do that.
Haha ...is anything wrong on with my words? Please teach me????!

you have made a good start with English! If you keep studying, you will do well. If any of my corrections are confusing, please let me know.