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Our Amazing Brain . I believe that the humain brain has extraordinary abilities that scientists haven't discovered yet. Actually, there are phenomenons that we can't explain yet, like presentiments , intuitions and some complexed feelings we can have. For example, I once accidentally heard a german song, knowing that I neither understand or speak german, I started crying to the lyrics of that song, I felt something strange in me, as if that song touched something deep in my heart. It was absolutely strange since I didn't even know what the song was about, so I searched for the translation. It was actually a story about two people who fell in love while waiting for a bus, they kissed each other under the rain , then the girl took a bus and the boy never saw her again. A touching story indeed, and I feel confused about how my brain interpreted it or somehow understood it. One other thing, how can we explain the intuitions or presentiments ? It's a wide complexed subject, in fact. I bet everyone , for once at least in their life, felt bad or not comfortable about something or a decision, so they avoided it, and in the end it showed that the thing or the decision had bad consequences and results. So how can we explain that the brain even knew the wrongness or the badness of a decision or a thing before it even happened or been taken ?
Jul 7, 2015 10:11 PM
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Our Amazing Brain.

I believe that the humain brain has extraordinary abilities that scientists haven't discovered yet. Actually, there are phenomenons that we can't yet explain, such as presentiment, intuition and other complex feelings we may have.

For example, I once happened to hear a german song.  Knowing that I could neither understand nor speek german, I started crying to the lyrics of the song.  I felt something strange, as if that song had touched something deep in my heart.  It was remarkable, since I didn't even know what the song was about.  So, I searched for the translation.

It was a story about two people who fell in love while waiting for a bus, and they kissed each other in the rain.  Then, the girl got on another bus and the boy never saw her again.

It is a touching story.  I am still bewildered as to how my brain interpreted it or somehow understood it.

How can we explain intuitions or presentiments?

This is a largely complex subject.

I bet everyone, at least once in their lives, felt bad or uncomfortable about a situation or decision, so they avoided it.  In the end, the consequences of the decision were negative.

So, how can we explain whether the brain predicted the negative consequences, or intended to produce a bad result before it even happened?

July 7, 2015

Our Amazing Brain .

I believe that the humain brain has extraordinary abilities that scientists haven't discovered yet. Actually, there are phenomenons that we can't explain yet, like presentiments, intuitions and some complexed feelings we can have.

For example, I once accidentally heard a German song, knowing that I neither understand or speak German. I started crying to the lyrics of that song. I felt something strange in me, as if that song touched something deep in my heart. It was absolutely strange since I didn't even know what the song was about, so I searched for the translation.

 

It was actually a story about two people who fell in love while waiting for a bus. They kissed each other under the rain. Then the girl took a bus, and the boy never saw her again. 


A touching story indeed, and I feel confused about how my brain interpreted it or somehow understood it.

One other thing, how can we explain the intuitions or presentiments?

It's a wide complexed subject, in fact.


I bet everyone, for once at least in their life, felt bad or not comfortable about something or a decision, so they avoided it, and in the end, it showed that the thing or the decision had bad consequences and results.

So how can we explain that the brain even knew the wrongness or the badness of a decision or a thing before it even happened or been taken?


It's good to see that you're using line spacing. It does really help your writing for both appearance and expression.  You do need to be wary of your comma use and learn when to use the period (or "full-stop"). A comma is used for slight pauses usually.  If two statements are independent clauses and are not separated by a contraction, then use a period (a comma just won't do).  This was overall great! 

July 9, 2015

Our Amazing Brain .

I believe that the humain brain has extraordinary abilities that scientists haven't discovered yet. Actually, there are phenomenons that we can't explain yet, like presentiments , intuitions and some complexed feelings we can have.

For example, I once accidentally heard a german song, knowing that I neither understand or speak german, I started crying to the lyrics of that song, I felt something strange in me, as if that song touched something deep in my heart. It was absolutely strange since I didn't even know what the song was about, so I looked for the translation.
It was a story about two people who fell in love while waiting for a bus, they kissed each other under the rain , then the girl took a bus and the boy never saw her again.

A touching story indeed, and I feel confused about how my brain interpreted it or somehow understood it.

Another thing, how can we explain the intuitions or presentiments ?

It's a wide complexed subject, in fact.

I bet everyone , for once at least in their life, felt bad or not comfortable about something or a decision, so they avoided it, and in the end it showed that the thing or the decision had bad consequences and results.

So how can we explain that the brain even knew the wrongness or the badness of a decision or a thing before it even happened or was taken ?

 

Good writting!

July 7, 2015
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