The first text
My name is Rocio. It is my first text here, because I am new in this page. Well, I am gonna tell you about myself. As I said, my name is Rocio. I live in Argentina. Entre Rios- Parana city.I live with my parents, and my brothers and sisters. I am a student of secondary school. The next year I´ll finished the school and I think I'll study medicine or nutrition in the university. I am have been learning english since 2012, and the my reason is because I want to travel to some place from away from Argentina for exchange and meet new people, new cultures, and new ways of living because I think that the way of life here is very different to others countries. and I would like to travel around the world just because it is my dream.
I hope I meet new people here and perfect the language! I want, too help the people who are learning Spanish.
Thank you for reading. Bye
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The first text
My name is Rocio. It is my first text here (sin coma) because I am new in this page. Well, I'm gonna tell you about me. As I said, my name is Rocio. I live in Argentina. Entre Rios- Parana city.I live with my parents, my brothers and sisters. I am a student of secondary school, the next year I´ll finished the school and I think in study medicine or nutrition at (Si no me equivoco) the university. I am learning english since 2012, and the reason is because I want to travel to some place far away from Argentina for exchange and meet new people, new culturs, new ways of living because I think that the way of live here is very diferent to others countries and I would like travel around the world just because it is my dream.
I hope met new people here and perfect the lenguage! I want to help the people who are learning spanish.
Thank you for read. Bye
Pues bienvenida seas :)
The first text
My name is Rocio. It is my first text here because I am new to this page. Well, I gonna tell you about me. As I said, my name is Rocio. I live in Argentina. Entre Rios- Parana city.I live with my parents and my brothers and sisters. I am a student at secondary school. Next year I´ll finish school and I think I will study medicine or nutrition at university. I have been learning English since 2012 and the reason is because I want to travel to some place away from Argentina for exchange and meet new people, (need verb: experience?) new cultures and new ways of living because I think that the way of life here is very diferent to other countries and I would like to travel around the world just because it is my dream.
I hope to meet new people here and perfect the language! I want to help the people who are learning spanish.
Thank you for read. Bye
The first text
My name is Rocio. It is my first text here, because I am new on this page. Well, I gonna tell you about me. As I said, my name is Rocio. I live in Argentina. Entre Rios- Parana city.I live with my parents and my brothers and sisters. I am a student at a secondary school.I´ll finish school next year and i think i'll study medicine or nutrition at university. I am learning english since 2012, and the reason is because I want to travel to some place away from Argentina to exchange and meet new people, new cultures, new ways of living because I think that the way of living here is very diferent from that in others countries and I would like to travel around the world just because it is my dream.
I hope to meet new people here and improve my English! I want,as well, to help people who are learning spanish.
Thank you for reading this. Bye
