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IELTS exam2 after this he asked me about the general chinese family business, i answered i think its resterant, since food is really important in china, even chinese people treat cooking as an art, many europeans and americans came to china was very suprising about chinese food, and i also told him a small joke: one day a german came to a chinese resterant and saw a bowl of potatos in water, so he was thinking that finally i found some food simaliar with my country's food in china, then he came to ask who will eat this potatos, then the chinese people in the resterant figered to the pigs in the yard, the german was so diserpoint and sad. (i heared this from http://weibo.com/leikexiaoliumang?sudaref=www.baidu.com i still dont think its a very clear express, but he smiled.) He had also asked about what kind od cloth do i like to wear, i said i like wear clothes in a free style, that makes me feel free and comfortable.(its seems that he expecting i speaking more but i didnt) thats all i have rememer, its not that bad, i was lucky to meet this examinar, hope he was satisfiad with my performance. i also made new friend after this exam, now i will prepare for the left parts of IELTS.
Jul 8, 2015 3:46 AM
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IELTS exam2

After this, he the examiner asked me about the general typical chinese family business, I answered that I think it's a restaurant, since food is really important in China. Chinese people treat cooking as an art. Many europeans and americans that come to China are very suprised about chinese food. and Then I also told him a small joke: one day a German came to a chinese restaurant and saw a bowl of potatos in water, so he was thinking thought that he had finally i found some food simaliar with my to his country's food. in china, Then he came to asked who will eat these potatos, then and the chinese people in the restaurant figered pointed to the pigs in the yard. The German was so disappointed and sad. (I heard this from http://weibo.com/leikexiaoliumang?sudaref=www.baidu.com. i still dont think its a very clear express, but he smiled.) He had also asked me about what the kind of clothes do i like to wear. I said I like to wear clothes in a free style, that makes me feel free and comfortable. (Its seems that he was expecting i speaking me to say more but I didn't) that's all I have remember. It's not that bad. I was lucky to meet this examiner, I hope he was satisfied with my performance. I also made new friend after this exam. Now I will prepare for the left last parts of IELTS.

 

Good effort. Keep up the hard work. You tried some complicated tenses here. 

In English the personal pronoun "I" is always capitalized. 

You use many commas here rather than periods. Next time use the period first rather than the comma.

July 8, 2015
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