Lani
I met her. Shining was only Untill 2years ago. He likes me and the house but he wanted to play with cats because he was bored. So he sometimes looking at out the window and crying when he saw another cat. I thought he needed cat family. I made up my mind to do make his sisters. And then, One day I found her where I looked for Shining. I remembered something that I had heard a crying baby cat last night. There on the side by my house. She was tied at tree. I asked my neighbor why she was tied and they said "it was safe because there is many car but she doen't know cars" I can understand. but I think that's not safe for her. because she was already hurt a little bit and there was bleeding on her eyes. I took her and I brought her to the hospital. and suddenly she is comming my heart. She was very small and skinny. she lost her family She seemed tired and need family But I was worried when they would meet each other. beause I had Heard that some cats doesn't likes another cats. But my first cat who very fat cat Shining was very kind. He always take care of her when she was young more than now. So I am very happy and we are very happy now. Thank you for reading. Please~let me know if I did something wrong. And make full sentences.
Jul 8, 2015 3:55 AM
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I met her.

Shining was only alone until 2 years ago.
He likes me and the house but he wanted to play with other cats because he was bored.
So he would sometimes look at out the window and cry when he saw another cat.
I thought he needed a cat family.
I made up my mind to do make his give him sisters.

And then, one day, I found her where I had found looked for Shining.
I remembered something, that I had heard a crying baby cat (baby cat = kitten) last night.

There on the side by of my house, she was tied at to a tree.
I asked my neighbor why she was tied and they said,"it was is safe because there is are many cars but she doen't know understand cars"
I can understand, but I think that's not safe for herbecause she was already hurt a little bit and there was blood on her eyes.

I took her and I brought her to the hospital and suddenly she is comming my heart ("she melted my heart", this is a saying that is normally said when you see something cute).
She was very small and skinnyshe lost her family, she seemed tired, and needed a family

But I was worried about when they would meet each other, beause I had heard that some cats don't likes another other cats.
But my first cat Shining, who is a very fat cat, Shining was very kind.
He always would take care of her when she was young more than now.
So I am very happy and we are very happy now.

Thank you for reading.
Please~let me know if I did something wrong.
And make full sentences.

 

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THEY ARE SUPER CUTE :) I'm glad you gave Shining a friend.

July 8, 2015
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