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please correct my writing Recently I watched a movie Devdas. The movie is all about a love story and it portrayed how life of Dev was ruined when he did not succeeded to convert his love affairs into married life. The stories had emotions .anger and two beautiful songs. In the movie the main characters were Dev,Paro, Chandramukhi. Dev belongs to rich family and his father was a land lord .Dev borne in India, completed his education in London. Paro belongs to poor family, but Paro was beautiful ,charming and having blue eyes. from the childhood dev and paro were two friends .they eat together , sit together as if they are one soul having two bodies ,but Dev father did not like the Dev’s madness towards Paro.he decided to send him London for his education ,by hearing this news Paro eyes was glistened with tear
Jul 8, 2015 4:39 AM
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please correct my writing

Recently I watched a movie Devdas. The movie is all about a love story and it portrayed how Dev's life was ruined when he did not succeed in converting his love affairs to married life. The stories had emotions, anger and two beautiful songs. In the movie, the main characters were Dev, Paro, and Chandramukhi. Dev belongs to rich family and his father was a land lord. Dev was borne in India, but completed his education in London. Paro belongs to a poor family, but Paro is beautiful, charming and has blue eyes. From the childhood Dev and Paro were best friends. They ate together, sat together as if they were one soul in two bodies, but Dev's father did not like the Dev’s madness towards Paro. He decided to send him London for his education. Hearing this news, Paro eyes was glistened with tears.

July 31, 2015
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