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chanta jomle baraye aks 1. In ye zane. Dokhtaro pesaresh kenare un miistand. Hameye unha baham ye ketabi mikhunan. 2. In pesar ba asbab bazi bazi mikone. Az asbab baziha mashinha ro bishtar dust dare. 3. In dokhtar to daftaresh naghashi mikone. Az medade rangi estefade mikone. 4. To in aks pedar ba bachehayesh havapeyma ro jam mikonan.
Jul 22, 2015 5:16 PM
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chanta jomle baraye aks

this is correct, but I would rather say that this way: "chanta jomle darbareye aks"

baraye: for | darbareye: about

 

1. In ye zane. Dokhtaro pesaresh kenare un miistand. Hameye unha baham ye ketabi mikhunan.

they are not standing, they are sitting besides their mother, so you'd better say: "dokhtaro pesaresh kenaresh neshastand/neshaste and"

even if they were standing you should have said: "dokhtaro pesaresh kenaresh istadand/istade and"

miistand: they stand | istade and: they are standing

 

2. In pesar ba asbab bazi bazi mikone. Az asbab baziha mashinha ro bishtar dust dare.


3. In dokhtar to daftaresh naghashi mikone. Az medade rangi estefade mikone.

"naghashi mikone" seems correct, you can also say: "naghashi mikeshe/mikeshad"


4. To in aks pedar ba bachehayesh havapeyma ro jam mikonan.

seems like they are doing something like a puzzle to make an airplane. so "pedar ba bachehash havapeyma dorost mikonand

bachehayash/bachehash

 

Hope it's helpful. бс

August 5, 2015

chanta jomle baraye (in) aks

1. In ye zane. Dokhtaro pesaresh kenaresh un miistand neshastan. Hameye unha baham ye ketabi (ketab) mikhunan.
2. In pesar ba asbab bazi bazi mikone. Az asbab baziha bishtar az mashinha ro bishtar dust dare khoshesh miad.
3. In dokhtar to tu daftaresh naghashi mikone. va az medade rangi estefade mikone.
4. To Tu in aks pedar ba bachehayesh havapeyma ro jam mikonan sare ham bandi mikone.

 

Скоро говоришь на персидском как носители персидского! Поздравляю!

July 31, 2015

چند تا جمله برای چند تا عکس

 

.این یه زنه. دختر و پسرش کنارش نشستن (نشسته‌اند). همه با هم دارن (دارند) یه کتاب می‌خونن

.این پسر داره (دارد) با اسباب بازی‌هاش بازی می‌کنه. بینِ اسباب بازی‌ها ماشین‌ها رو بیشتر[از همه] دوست داره

.این دختر داره (دارد) تو دفترش نقاشّی می‌کنه [/می‌کشه]. از مداد رنگی استفاده می‌کنه

.[تو این عکس، پدر با بچّه‌هاش دارن (دارند) [یه] هواپیما[یِ کاردستی/اسباب بازی رو] درست می‌کنند [/سرِ هم می‌کنن


You might want to check out the present progressive tense:

http://www.jahanshiri.ir/fa/en/indicative-present-progressive

July 22, 2015

chand jomle baraye <em>in</em> aks

1. Inja ye zane. Dokhtaro pesaresh kenaresh  miistad neshastan. una daran baham ketab mikhunan.
2. In pesar dare ba asbab bazihash bazi mikone. az beyne mashinha ro bishtar az baghye asbab bazihash dust dare.
3. In dokhtar dare to daftaresh  ba medad rangi naghashi mikone. Az medade rangi estefade mikone.
4. To in aks pedar dare ba bachehash ye havapeyma misaze  jam mikonan.

 

az medad rangi eshtefade mikone dorste vali inro mmishe toye jomleye aval ja dad.

kheili khoob neveshte boodi.

July 22, 2015
salam Behtare ke bejaye "kenare un miistand begi "kenaresh vastadan/istade'and" movafagh bashi
August 3, 2015
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