Forrest Tung
Hi, guys. It's been a long time... Hey my friends, I'm Forrest, it's been a long time that I haven't log in the italki, because I fogot my password number before.*_* I have addmitted to the East China Institute Univerysity this summer, it may be the most opportunity things of mine and now I'm very looking forward to entering the university as soon as possible. O(∩_∩)O~ It still have 25 days that I can go to the city where my boyfriend live in, we plan to play at his hometown for several days, during these time, he will bring me to visit the famous scene views and drift, it sounds cool. And the later several days we will go to the other city together where my boyfriend's university is, because the beginning day of his school is 6-day-long earlier than mine. By the way, we will celebrate my 21-year-old birthday there. When the day is that I need to go to my school, it is Saturday, so my boyfriend can come to the city where my new university is with me. I'm looking forward to those happiness coming soon.
Jul 24, 2015 10:34 AM
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Hi, guys. It's been a long time...
Hey my friends, I'm Forrest, it's been a long time that I haven't log in the since I logged into italki, because I forgot my password number before.*_*
I have admitted been accepted into to the East China Institute Univerysity this summer, it may be the most a big opportunity things of mine for me and now I'm very really looking forward to entering the starting university as soon as possible. O(∩_∩)O~
It I still have 25 days that I can to go to the city where my boyfriend lives in, we plan to play stay at his hometown for several days, during these this time, he will bring me to visit show me the famous scene views and we will just hang out together drift, it sounds cool. And the later several days towards the end of my trip we will go to the other city together where my boyfriend's university is, because the beginning day first day of his school term/trimester is 6-day-long 6 days earlier than mine. By the way, we will celebrate my 21st-year-old birthday there. When the day is that On that day I need to go to my schooluniversity, it is on Saturday, so my boyfriend can come to the city where my new university is with me. I'm looking forward to all of this so much! those happiness coming soon.

Well done Forrest! Some excellent English here!

 

July 29, 2015
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Hi, guys. It's been a long time...

Hey my friends, I'm Forrest, it's been a long time that I haven't logged in the at italki, because I had fogotten my password number (before).*_*
I have been addmitted to the East China Institute Univerysity this summer, it may be the most best opportunity things of mine for me and now I'm very much looking forward to entering the university as soon as possible. O(∩_∩)O~
It I still have 25 days that I to can go to the city where my boyfriend lives in, we plan to play stay at his hometown for several days, during these this time, he will bring take me to visit the famous scene scenic views and drift (?), it sounds cool. And the later several days we will go for several days to the other city together where my boyfriend's university is, because the beginning day of his school is 6-day-long earlier his school starts 6 days earlier than mine. By the way, we will celebrate my 21-year-old 21st birthday there. (When the day is that I need to go to my school, it is Saturday,) Better: My classes start on (a) Saturday, on  so my boyfriend can come with me to the city where my new university is with me. I'm looking forward to those happiness happy days which are coming soon OR: I'm looking forward to all of this. (if your're looking forward to something it's understood that it's going to make you happy).

 

Please don't be upset about all these green marks - your text was perfectly understandable. A very good effort!

Regards,

Susanne

July 29, 2015
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