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My Day Today i was wake up at 6 p.m., is very late ! I'have try to see "The beach" with Leonardo Dicaprio but in English, i'have nothing understand ! But is not a big deal, because i'have see Leonardo, he are so beautiful ! And this story give me desire to go to Thailand, i love this country ! After to see movie's i was cook a omelette, with five egs, a veal stock, grass and i was take one steack that i was divited. Is so good with ketchup ! And now i speack with friends on my selfphones :)
Jul 24, 2015 11:35 PM
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My Day

Today i was woke up at 6 p.m., which is very late! I tried to watch "The beach", (with Leonardo Dicaprio) in English, but I understood nothing! It was no big deal because I got to see Leonardo, he is so handsome! This story also gave me a desire to go to Thailand, I love that country! After watching the movie, I cooked an omelette with five egs, a veal stock, grass and chopped steak. It was so good with ketchup! And now, I'm speaking with friends on my cell phone :)

July 25, 2015

My Day

Today I was woke up at 6 p.m., <em>which</em> is very late <em>for me</em>! I have tried to see <em>watch</em> "The beach" with Leonardo Dicaprio but in English, <em>but</em> i'have nothing understand <em>I couldn't understand anything</em>! But, it is not a big deal, because i'have see <em>I saw</em> Leonardo. He are is so beautiful! And this story give <em>gave</em> me desire to go to Thailand. I love this country! After to see <em>I went to the</em> movies, I was cooked an omelette with five eggs, veal stock, grass(lettuce??) and I was take <em>took</em> one steack <em>steak</em> that I was divited(divided??). It is so good with ketchup! Now I speack <em>am talking</em> with friends on my selfphones <em>cell phone</em> :)

 

(Remember to capitalize "i" and no space between the phrase and the period or exclamation point which follows)

July 26, 2015

My Day

Today I woke up at 6 p.m., it was very late! I watched "The beach" with Leonardo Dicaprio, but tried to do it in English. I understood nothingIt was not a big deal, though, because I could see Leonardo, he is so handsomeThe story made me want to go to Thailand, I love that country! After watching the movie I cooked an omelette with five eggs, veal and some salad. I had only half the steak. It tasted so good with ketchup! And now I am texting my friends on my cell phone. :)

July 24, 2015

My Day.

Today I woke (wake, woke, have woken) wake up at 6 p.m., that is very late ! I' watched have try to see "The beach" with Leonardo Dicaprio, but in English. I  didn't have nothing understand anything! But is not a big deal, because i have see Leonardo, he is (is = singular / are = plural) so beautiful! And this story gave me desire to go to Thailand, i love this country! After I saw to see the movie i was cooked an omelette, with five egs, a veal stock, grass and i was take one steack that i was divited. It is so good with ketchup! And now I am speaking with friends on my cell phone :)

 

Good job, She.

 

In English, there is no space between the last word in a sentence and punctuation marks.

Example:

(English) Did you see my dog?  No space! (French) Tu a vu mon chien ?

(English) Your car is cool!   (French) Ta voiture est cool !

 

If you want to talk / write about an action in the past that is finished, you use, in French, le passé composé: J'ai parlé avec lui hier soir. In English, add -ed to the root word; but, sometimes, the word changes.

Example1: I walked to my house yesterday. (I walk, I walked, I have walked) = (present, past, present perfect)

Example2: I drove to my University. (I drive, I drove, I have driven).

 

--Ravi.

 

 

July 28, 2015

My Day

Today, I was woke up at 6 p.m., it is very late ! I_have try had tried to see watch "The Beach" with Leonardo Dicaprio but in English, and i'have I understood nothing understand ! But it is not a big deal, because i'have I had seen Leonardo, he are is so beautiful!* And this story gives me a desire** to go to Thailand, I love this country! After to see watching the movie,'s I was cooked an omelette, with five eggs, a veal stock, grass herbs*** and i was take one a steak that I was divitedchopped up {or "cut into pieces}. It is so good with ketchup! And now, I speack am talking with friends on my selfphones cellphone. :)

 

*"Beautiful" is okay, but we usually associate it with women and also things that are pretty. For men, we usually say "handsome".

**«Ce film me donne envie d'aller...» =>This film makes me want to go/gives me the urge to go...

***«Grass» en anglais est comme un pelouse. :)

July 25, 2015
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