我的新的头像

我变了我的头像。我的新的头像是一头羊。为什么一头羊？羊不好看，不力。第一当然我的生肖是羊。而且这年是羊年。
第二我喜欢我的生肖。我上个夏天一天爬山。山上很高没有人，没有树，天气不好的，冷，下雨。不过峰上景色十分漂亮，很安静。 羊住在那个很难，很漂亮的地方。
虽然找到美丽的地方很难但是我也努力找到那么美丽地方,美丽生命。
第三我在italki喜欢用一个匿名头像。

(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?)

I changed my profile picture. My new profile picture is a sheep. Why a sheep? Sheep are not attractive, are not strong. The first reason is, of course, my Chinese zodiac animal is a sheep, and also this is the year of the sheep.
The second reason is I like my zodiac animal. One day last summer I was up in the mountains. High up there are no people, no trees. The weather is bad, cold, it rains. However on the summit the scenery is very beautiful it is very peaceful. The sheep live in that difficult but beautiful place.
Although it is difficult I also want to strive to reach beautiful places/life.
Thirdly I like to use an anonymous profile picture on italki.

How about :

                                                       《我的新头像》

    我换了一个头像。我的新头像是一头羊。羊既不好看，又没力量。为什么是一头羊？（Chinese logic is 'reason plus result'.）

    第一，当然是因为我的生肖是羊。而且今年是羊年。
    第二，我喜欢我的生肖。我去年夏天的一天去爬山。山上很高，没有人也没有树，天气也不好的，很冷还下雨。不过峰上景色十分漂亮，很宁静。（安静的person, 宁静的scenery） 羊住在那个条件很差却很漂亮的地方。（a difficult place means "条件很差的地方"）虽然找到美丽的地方很难，但是我也努力找到了那么美丽的地方，美丽的生命。
    第三，我喜欢在italki用一个匿名头像。

    (我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?)

我的新的头像<em>（Omitting the "的" makes this sentence more consice.)</em>

我（改）变了我的头像。我的新的头像是一头羊。为什么一头羊？羊不好看，不力强壮。第一当然是因为我的生肖是羊。而且这年是羊年。 <em>（strength:力气，力量；strong：强壮的）</em>
第二是因为我喜欢我的生肖。我上个夏天有一天爬山。山上很高，没有人，没有树，天气不好的，冷，下雨。不过峰山顶上景色十分漂亮，很安静。 羊住在那个很难环境艰苦，很漂亮的地方。 
虽然找到美丽的地方很难，但是我也努力找到那么美丽地方,美丽生命。
第三是因为我在italki喜欢用一个匿名头像。

(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?) （Very good Chinese. Did you write it in traditional Chinese deliberately?)

I changed my profile picture. My new profile picture is a sheep. Why a sheep? Sheep are not attractive, are not strong. The first reason is, of course, my Chinese zodiac animal is a sheep, and also this is the year of the sheep.
The second reason is I like my zodiac animal. One day last summer I was up in the mountains. High up there are no people, no trees. The weather is bad, cold, it rains. However on the summit the scenery is very beautiful it is very peaceful. The sheep live in that difficult but beautiful place.
Although it is difficult I also want to strive to reach beautiful places/life.
Thirdly I like to use an anonymous profile picture on italki.

进步好大！！加油！

我的新的头像

我的新的头像

我变了我的头像。我的新的头像是一头羊。为什么一头羊？羊不好看，不力。

我更新了我的头像。我的新的头像是一只羊。为什么一只羊呢？羊既不好看，也没有什么力量。

第一当然我的生肖是羊。而且这年是羊年。

第一当然我的生肖是羊。而且今年是羊年。

第二我喜欢我的生肖。我上个夏天一天爬山。山上很高没有人，没有树，天气不好的，冷，下雨。不过峰上景色十分漂亮，很安静。 羊住在那个很难，很漂亮的地方。

第二，我喜欢羊。去年夏天，我花了一整天的时间爬了一座山。那座山上很高，没有人，没有树，那天天气不好的，很冷，在下雨。不过峰上景色十分漂亮，很安静祥和。 羊群就住在这样一个很陡峭，但是很漂亮的地方。

虽然找到美丽的地方很难但是我也努力找到那么美丽地方,美丽生命。
追寻美的过程很艰辛，无论风景或生活，但是我也要像羊一样努力坚持。

第三我在italki喜欢用一个匿名头像。

第三，我想用一个匿名头像。

(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?)

That's damn right, keep practising, good luck.

I changed my profile picture. My new profile picture is a sheep. Why a sheep? Sheep are not attractive, are not strong. The first reason is, of course, my Chinese zodiac animal is a sheep, and also this is the year of the sheep.
The second reason is I like my zodiac animal. One day last summer I was up in the mountains. High up there are no people, no trees. The weather is bad, cold, it rains. However on the summit the scenery is very beautiful it is very peaceful. The sheep live in that difficult but beautiful place.
Although it is difficult I also want to strive to reach beautiful places/life.
Thirdly I like to use an anonymous profile picture on italki.

我的新的头像

我变更换了我的头像。我的新的头像是一头只羊。为什么一头只羊？羊既不好看，不力又不够强壮。第一，当然是因为我的生肖是羊。而且这今年是羊年。
第二，我喜欢我的生肖-羊。我上个夏天去年夏季的某一天，我爬上了一座山。高高的山顶上很高没有人，没有树。那天天气不好的，很冷，而且在下雨。不过峰山顶上景色十分漂亮美丽，很非常安静祥和。 羊群就住在那个很难，很既艰险又漂亮的地方。
虽然找到美丽的地方很难但是我也努力找到那么美丽地方,美丽生命。

尽管追寻美十分艰难，不论是风景还是生命，我都想像羊群一样努力奋斗。
第三，我在italki上(，)我喜欢用一个匿名头像。

(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?)

Strive for the beauty of life and nature like a sheep.

I changed my profile picture. My new profile picture is a sheep. Why a sheep? Sheep are not attractive, are not strong. The first reason is, of course, my Chinese zodiac animal is a sheep, and also this is the year of the sheep.
The second reason is I like my zodiac animal. One day last summer I was up in the mountains. High up there are no people, no trees. The weather is bad, cold, it rains. However on the summit the scenery is very beautiful it is very peaceful. The sheep live in that difficult but beautiful place.
Although it is difficult I also want to strive to reach beautiful places/life.
Thirdly I like to use an anonymous profile picture on italki.

我的新的头像(<em>＂的＂可以选择其中一个留下即可</em>)

我改变了(/更换了)我的头像。我的新的头像是一头(山)羊。为什么是一头羊(呢)？

虽然山羊長得不好看，不力？外表也不够强壮，但我之所以会选择它是因為：

第一，当然是因為我的生肖是(/属)羊。而且这今年是羊年。
第二，我(很)喜欢(/中意)我的生肖。上个去年夏天有一天我去爬山。山上很高，没有人，没有树；天气很不好的，<em>带著冷风</em>，下<em>著</em>雨。不过(高)峰上(的)景色十分漂亮，很安(/寧)静。羊住在那个很艰难，卻很漂亮的地方(/羊<em>群就生長</em>在那样艰困，然而卻相當悠美的环境)。 虽然(要)找到美丽的地方很难，但(是)我也想努力(/试图)找到那么美丽的地方、美丽的生命。
第三，我在italki(上)喜欢(/偏好)用一个匿名头像(代表自己)。

(我自知中文水準淺薄, <em>但</em>若不練習何能精進?)(<em>～說得好</em>！)

I changed my profile picture. My new profile picture is a sheep. Why a sheep? Sheep are not attractive, are not strong. The first reason is, of course, my Chinese zodiac animal is a sheep, and also this is the year of the sheep.
The second reason is I like my zodiac animal. One day last summer I was up in the mountains. High up there are no people, no trees. The weather is bad, cold, it rains. However on the summit the scenery is very beautiful it is very peaceful. The sheep live in that difficult but beautiful place.
Although it is difficult I also want to strive to reach beautiful places/life.
Thirdly I like to use an anonymous profile picture on italki.