Aisha
Life in Shenzhen It have been fifteen days when I first arrived at Shenzhen.I lived in Xian for five years. I am familiar all things in Xian.she has been divided in four areas.South,North,West,East.most time of the five years,I lived in the South,It's the center of Xian.I finished my school there.when I graduated,I came to Chengdu,I like the city,But the job seems bad,so I left.I like Chengdu,but I don't love Chengdu,my love is Xian.not beacause Xian is how good,It's a familiarity,just as you and your hometown.I am not a changeble girl,I eaven dicided not to leave Xian. So What?mow I am in Guangdong,and I want to find job here,a job about english. My boyfriend is here.I came to see him from Xian to Shenzhen.before I came,we were frrends.he always took care of me.
Jul 28, 2015 9:50 AM
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Life in Shenzhen

It have has been fifteen days since when I first arrived at in Shenzhen. I lived in Xian for five years. I am familiar with everything all things in Xian. She is  has been divided into  four areas. The south, north, west, and east. I mostly most time of the five years,I lived in the south. It's the center of Xian. I finished my schooling there. When I graduated, I went to Chengdu, I liked the city, but the work was job seems bad, so I left. I like Chengdu, but I don't love Chengdu, my love is  for Xian, not beacause Xian is how good great,  it's a familiarity, just as you feel towards and your hometown. I am not a changeble girl, I eaven decided not to leave Xian.
So what now?  m ow I am in Guangdong,and I want to find job here, a job including about English. My boyfriend is here. I came to see visit him from Xian to Shenzhen. Before I came, we were friends, he always took care of me.

July 28, 2015
That is very good story . There are lots of opporunity to find a good job in shenzhen. Hope you can love this city .
July 28, 2015
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