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Yantai I think Yantai is a beautiful place. It is in Shandong province of China. I had gone there for several times. I like Yantai very much, fresh air, blue sky, green mountain, vast sea, all of them make me happy and relaxed. I hope I have an opportunity to go there again.
Jul 28, 2015 1:41 PM
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Yantai

I think Yantai is a beautiful place. It is in Shandong province, (of) China. I have been (had gone) there (for) several times. I like Yantai very much, fresh air, blue sky, green mountain, vast sea, all of them make me happy and relaxed. I hope I have an opportunity to go there again.

 

Your writing is very clear and descriptive. As for Yantai, I agree with you. I also went to Weihai and Penglai on my journey, and they were also interesting places. 

July 28, 2015
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