juan castro
Many people around the world This is a big place (our planet), here there are too many different cultures, languages, interests etc. But despite these differences there is something that makes us equal face the eyes of all the humanity, that is our social sense. We are socio-cultural animals therefore we have the same mind, the same way or interests to interact with others in order to be accepted in the society. I have never seen one person in the world whom does not like to be with others; all the people want or need to belong to a determinate community, have a relationship whatever will be. Have not you thought about this? Well, I guess not because all we are so busy that we really don´t take a look around, we only put our attention, our eyes and our mind in our social life, do you got it? Can you see that? We´re social animals...
Jul 28, 2015 2:00 PM
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Many people around the world
This is a big place (our planet), here there are too many different cultures, languages and interests etc. But despite these differences there is something that makes us equal face in the eyes of all the humanity, that is our social sense. We are socio-cultural animals therefore we have the same way mind, the same way or interests to interact with others in order to be accepted in the society.
I have never met one single person in the world who does not like to be with others; everyone wants or needs to belong to a determinate community, have a relationship whatever it may be.
Have not you ever thought about this? Well, I guess not because all we are all so busy that we really don´t really notice, we only pay attention to our social life, do you get it? Can you see that? We´re social animals...

A good point. Blue = suggestions Red = corrections.

Two phrases that could be useful to you are.
1.I have never met a single person that ....... (Single, adds more emphasis)
2. Pay attencion to something.

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July 29, 2015

Many people around the world

This is a big place (our planet), here there are too many different cultures, languages, and interests etc. But despite these differences there is something that makes us equal in the face the eyes of all the humanity, that is our social sense. We are socio-cultural animals therefore we have the same mind, the same way or interests to interact with others in order to be accepted in the society.
I have never seen one person in the world whom does not like to be with others; all the people everyone wants or needs to belong to a determinate community, have a relationship whatever it will be.
Have not you thought about this? Well, I guess not because all we are all so busy that we really don´t take a look around, we only put place our attention, our eyes and our minds on in our social life, do you get it? Can you see that? We´re social animals...

July 28, 2015
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