Alice
I am stay at night I want go sleep but I can't sleeping, because the temperature is very higher in this city I living. I hate the summer with day is very hot. I also dislike the winter with the day is very cold. If impossible, now I want to be a fish live in the ocean.
Jul 28, 2015 4:26 PM
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I (am stay at night) can't sleep!

I want to sleep / to go to sleep ...but I can't (sleeping,) because the temperature at night is very high (higher) in the (this) city where I live. (I living.) I hate the summer when days become extremely (with day is very) hot. I also dislike (the) winter when it gets (with the day is) very cold in the daytime. Although (If) impossible, now I want/ long to be a fish which lives in the ocean.

 

Well written. I agree, there does seem to be great variations in temperature nowadays. 

July 28, 2015
No, what I am have just a little fun
July 29, 2015

I am staying at night

I want to go to sleep but I can't because the temperature is very high where I live . I hate the summer which is veílike as well as the winter which is very cold. If i were, i would to be a fish that i can live in the ocean.   Ples help me check 

July 28, 2015
Oh. Isn't there an Air conditioner in your bedroom?
July 28, 2015
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