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italki notebook 问题 四个小时之前我已经写了另外一个notebook entry. 标题《咍利波特火车》 在我的会员档案作文簿我能够见到。可是在全部中文(晋通话),我不看到。 我想沒有人看到因为它有只一次浏览...应该是我! 请问你们看到《咍利波特火车》?
Jul 28, 2015 5:07 PM
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italki notebook 问题

四个小时之前我已经写了另外一个notebook entry.
四个小时之前我本来已经写好了一篇标题是《咍利波特火车》的作文。
标题《咍利波特火车》

在我的会员档案作文簿我能够见到。可是在全部中文(晋通话),我不看到。
我在“我的作文簿”里能够看到,可是在选取了全部中文的界面内,我看不到我已经提交的作文。
我想沒有人看到因为它有只一次浏览...应该是我!

我想,可能还没有人看到它,因为浏览次数只有一次,而这一次显然是我操作的。

请问你们看到《咍利波特火车》?

请问,你们有没有看过《哈利波特火车》?

 

Hi SC,
I have no idea about《哈利波特火车》.Maybe you want to ask” Have you ever seen "Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire" ? Or you just want to express that the train that Harry Potter took in the film?
To make you more clearly, I listed the Harry Potter's film series' name in Chinese for you reference. Hope it will helpful. By the way, my son's English name is Cedric. I also like the actor who portrayed Cedric Diggory. LOL

1、《哈利·波特与魔法石》
Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone
2、《哈利·波特与密室》
Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets
3、《哈利·波特与阿兹卡班囚徒》
Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban
4、《哈利·波特与火焰杯》
Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire
5、《哈利·波特与凤凰社》
Harry Potter and the Order of Phoenix
6、《哈利·波特与混血王子》
Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince
7、《哈利·波特与死亡圣器》
Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows

July 29, 2015
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italki notebook 问题

四个小时之前,我写了一篇作文。 “已经” is the perfect tense.

标题《咍利波特火车》。 you can't save the verb

在我的会员档案作文簿中我能够见到。可是在全部中文(通话),我看到。 ( “普”  “晋”)

我想沒有人看到,是因为它有只一次浏览...应该是我! LOL

请问你们看到《咍利波特火车》了吗?

 

看到了,而且修改了。lol

July 29, 2015
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刚刚看到,刚刚帮你修改。

我曾和你说过这个问题。

July 29, 2015

italki notebook 问题

四个小时之前我已经写了另外一个notebook entry.

标题(是)《(哈)利波特火车》

在我的会员档案作文簿(里)我能够(看)到。可是在全部中文((普)通话)(中)我看(不)到。

我想沒有人看到(是)因为它只(有)一次浏览,(那)应该是我(浏览的)!

请问你们看到《(哈)利波特火车》(了吗)?

July 31, 2015
The title 《咍利波特火车》 is a notebook entry that I wrote yesterday. Both these notebook entries did not come up on the list of notebook chinese (mandarin). However, I could access them through my own italki profile page. I suspected people could not see the notebook entry as there were only 1 view of each entry and that was me doing it. It is only this morning that people can see the articles. Surprisingly, even if I get notification of a correction like now, I still have a delay of seeing the actual correction. It seems there are some problems with italki in this respect.
July 29, 2015
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