Hugo
English Course Letter Thank you very much for your corrections :) Hi Tom! I want to advertise you about the English course in Oxford because I don’t feel comfortable. The bedrooms are too small and the beds are uncomfortable. Also the food has a terrible flavor… I don’t like it! Of course when you want to have a shower you must do it with cold water. The activities are very bored and we don’t learn any new. If you can choose another place to do it is a good idea to changer you course. The last year I went to a course in Cambridge and it was so good because I had new experiences and I learned a lot of English. So I recommend you this. Have a good holidays! See you soon!
Jul 28, 2015 9:34 PM
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English Course Letter

Thank you very much for your corrections :)

Hi Tom!
I want to warn you about the English course in Oxford because I don’t feel comfortable.

The bedrooms are too small and the beds are uncomfortable. Also the food has a terrible flavor… I don’t like it! Of course when you want to have a shower you must do it with cold water. The activities are very boring and we aren't  learning anything new.
If you can choose another place to do it is a good idea to change your course. The last year I went to a course in Cambridge and it was so good because I had new experiences and I learned a lot of English. So I recommend you choose this one.

Have a good holiday!
See you soon!

 

Hello Hugo

Your text was understandable without problem although there were some mistakes. If you want to tell someone not to do something because it is not good we would usually use the verb 'warn + sb + (not) to + infinitive'.Boring is the effect something or somebody has on you - bored is how you feel.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

 

July 28, 2015
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