A letter of application (please, help me, I have an exam tomorrow and I need to correct this text)

Dear John Cooper,

I am writing in regards to the position offered as a helper in an international sports event. I am particularly interested in this opportunity because I love sports and there is nothing more interesting to me than to take a part in an event where there will be so many professional players of different disciplines.

I am experienced in volunteering at sport championships. I have worked as a part of the Real Madrid security team at a lot of matches during the European Championship and I sold tickets at the 2014 World of Cup in Spain.

I consider myself an expert in football history and am a very passionate fan of the Real Madrid Football Club. Furthermore, I play in the junior football team of this club as a goalkeeper. However, I enjoy watching a wide range of sports, like ping-pong, volleyball, and basketball.

I think I am a very good candidate for this position because I have extensive knowledge of sports competitions and I am willing to learn about any event related to sport.

I hope you will consider my application favourably and if you need more details, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours sincerely,

Carmen.

A letter of application (please, help me, I have an exam tomorrow and I need to correct this text)

Dear John Cooper,

 Regarding to the offered position of  helping in an international sports event. I am particularly interested to this opportunity because I love sports and there is no anything better to me than taking a part in an event where there will be so many professional players of several disciplines.

I am an experienced-or qualified- voluntary in sport championships. I have worked as a part of the Real Madrid security team in a lot of matches of the European Championship and I sold tickets in the World of Cup of Spain 2014.

I consider myself an expert in football history and a very passionate fan of the Real Madrid Football Club. Furthermore, I play in the junior football team of this club as a goalkeeper. However, I enjoy watching a wide range of sports, like ping-pong, volleyball or basketball.

I think I am a very good candidate to this position because I have extensive knowledge of sport competitions and I am willing to learn from any event related with sport.

I hope you will consider my application favourably and if you need more details, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours sincerously,

Carmen.

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A letter of application (please, help me, I have an exam tomorrow and I need to correct this text)

Dear John Cooper,

I am writing in regards to the position offered for a helper in an international sports event. I am particularly interested in this opportunity because I love sports and  to me there is nothing better than to take part in an event where there will be so many professional players of varied disciplines.

I am an experienced volunteer in sport championships. I have worked as a part of the Real Madrid security team in numerous European Championship matches as well as having sold tickets duringl the 2014 world cup.

I consider myself an expert in football history and a very passionate fan of the Real Madrid Football Club. Furthermore, I play in the junior football team of this club as a goalkeeper. However, I enjoy watching a wide range of sports, such as ping-pong, volleyball and basketball.

I think I am a qualified candidate to fulfill this position because I have extensive knowledge of sport competitions and am willing to learn from any event related to sports.

I hope you will consider my application favourably and if you need more details, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours sincerely,

Carmen.