José Alberto
About Her - Third Part. When she could pronounce more words, she always tried to talk about her babysitter with her parents. Gracefully, when she was a baby and woke up in the morning, the first thing that she looked for it was her babysitter's face. In that moment, her parents were jealous but they decided to put a photography of her nanny close to her cradle. Her babysitter was very appreciated in her family, she had a big family but they were very poor and always had economic problems. Her parents decided to hire her nanny forever and every week they gave a stock of food to her. Interestingly, when her husband didn´t have job, they talked with their friends about his work with wood. She was a curious girl, timid but very curious. She liked to hide her in her home and scaring her house workers, she knew every name and sometimes knew specific things about their families. One day, when she was playing she saw her nanny crying. Her son would graduate soon from his elementary school and she didn´t know if he could study his high school. At night, she was crying and her mother heard her. Her parents knew the babysitter's problem and they decided to make something, they gave an important gift to her nanny's son. A gift that would change many things in her youngest daughter. Saludos desde México.
Jul 29, 2015 4:52 AM
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About Her - Third Part.

When she could pronounce more words, she always tried to talk to her babysitter with her parents. When she was a baby,  she would wake up in the morning, and  the first thing that she noticed  was her babysitter's face. In that moment, her parents were jealous of the babysitter,  but they decided to put a photograph of her nanny close to her cradle.

The babysitter was very appreciated in her family, she had a big family but they were very poor and always had economic problems. Her parents decided to hire a nanny would stock up on a pile of food for her. Interestingly, when her husband didn´t have job, they would talked with their friends about his wood work. (carpentería en inglés se usa la palabra woodwork).

 

She was a curious girl, but very timid (como en español no se puede repetir curious). She liked to hide herself in the home and scare the staff. She knew every name and sometimes specific things about their families. One day, when she was playing, she saw her nanny crying. Her son would finish soon from his elementary school and didn´t know if he could get into his high school.

(para escuela elementario no usa graduarse en este contexto solamente para colegio secundario o universidad en inglés)

At night, she would cry and her mother heard her. Her parents knew about the babysitter's problem and they decided to do something. They gave an important gift to her nanny's son.

 

A gift that would change many things for her youngest daughter.


Saludos desde México.

August 9, 2015

About Her - Third Part.

 

When she could pronounce more words, she always tried to talk about her babysitter to her parents. When she was a baby and gracefully woke up in the morning, the first thing that she looked for it was her babysitter's face. In that moment, her parents were jealous but they decided to put a photography of her nanny close to her cradle.

Her babysitter was very appreciated by her family; she had a big family but they were very poor and always had financial problems. Her parents decided to hire her nanny forever and every week they gave a stock of food to her. Interestingly, when her husband didn't have job, they talked with their friends about his carpentry work. ((this is confusing.))

She was a curious girl, timid but very curious. She liked to hide her in her home and scare the house workers. She knew everyone's name and sometimes knew specific things about their families. One day, when she was playing, she saw her nanny crying. The nanny's/woman's son would graduate soon from his elementary school and she didn't know if he could continue his studies in high school.

That night, the girl was crying and her mother heard her. Her parents knew the babysitter's problem and they decided to do something. They gave an important gift to the nanny's son. A gift that would change many things in their youngest daughter.


Saludos desde México.

 

excellent work

July 29, 2015
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