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correct the sentens 1- The Iraqi girls and women were prevented from going to their schools or workplaces fear of attack or kidnapping. 2- Collecting personal information to be included in the government records is not allowed by the agency, unless the purpose of such collection relate directly to one of the agency's functions. 3- In fact, the talking about "Intisar" is simply considered empty words aimed to hide the true reason which stands behinds it external forces to sustain the war.
Jul 29, 2015 8:38 AM
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correct the sentens

1- The Iraqi girls and women were prevented from going to their schools or workplaces for/ because of fear of attack or kidnapping.
2- Collecting personal information to be included in the government records is not allowed by the agency, unless the purpose of such collection relates directly to one of the agency's functions.
3- In fact, the talking about "Intisar" is simply considered empty words aimed to at hide hiding the true reasons, which stands behinds it are external forces to sustain the war.

 

Excellent English, just minor errors!

July 29, 2015
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