Angel
My favourite film Recently I have seen the film called “Hello” and since then It has become my favourite film. It’s a piece of comedy about a girl who travels abroad to live new great experiences. The film is entertaining and funny. I think it’s the most gripping film I have ever seen and it’s more realistic than other films. Besides, the plot is enjoyable and easy to follow. Although it’s a bit quiet. To sum up, I recommend that you see this film because you won’t stop laughing.
Jul 29, 2015 9:51 AM
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My favourite film

Recently I have seen ("I recently saw" o "Recently, I saw..." El perfecto "have seen" sería mejor si estuvieras hablando de tu estado actual, como "I have seen every film by Steven Spielberg".  Hablas de un acontecimiento, se usa el pasado "I saw".)  the a film called “Hello” and since then It has become my favourite film.
It’s a piece of comedy about a girl who travels abroad to live new great experiences. The film is entertaining and funny. I think it’s the most gripping film I have ever seen and it’s more realistic than other films.
Besides, the plot is enjoyable and easy to follow. Although it’s a bit quiet (No sé lo que quieres decir, normalmente "quiet" no es un adjectivo común para pelis).
To sum up, I recommend that you see this film because you won’t stop laughing.

 

¡Bien hecho!  Un ensayo excelente con mucha gramatica complicada.  

July 29, 2015
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