César
This guy is not right This is the story about a guy who caused forest fire on purpose so he could extingish right after. "He went with his car from the city center to the outskirts. He set on fire remains left by harvester. Then he went back to the city council parking lot. Then he would go to extingish it as a volunteer." Police has deteined a man accused of provoking several forestfires during July. He used to provoke fire and then rushed away. But last time he crashed his car into a wall. That was the clue that allowed police to relate forestfires with him. The invesigation carried out has taken up to ten days, Witnesses also helped to indentify his car, which was seen by many of them minutes before forestfire began. Sadly, this is a true story.
Jul 29, 2015 3:44 PM
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This guy is not right

This is the story about a guy who caused forest fire on purpose so he could extingish it right after.

"He went with his car from the city center to the outskirts. He set on fire the remains left by harvester on fire. Then he went back to the city council parking lot. Then he would go to extingish it as a volunteer."

Police have detained a man accused of provoking several forestfires during July.

He usually to provoke started a fire and then rushed away.

(Used to suggests that he did it in the past, a long time ago, but that had then stopped doing it.)

 

But last time he crashed his car into a wall. That was the clue that allowed police to relate the forest_fires with to him.  The invesigation carried out has taken up to ten days.


Witnesses also helped to indentify his car, which was seen by many of them minutes before the forest_fire began.

Sadly, this is a true story.

 

 

Well done, César.  An excellent piece of writing, which I really enjoyed reading.  It certainly is a very sad story that someone would do that.

 

On a positive note, your English level is excellent!  You have written very well, with just a few small details to consider.  Some of them are also to make it sound more natural.

 

Keep up the good work!

Leigh

July 29, 2015
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This guy is not right

This is the story about a guy who started forest fires on purpose so he could extingish them right after.

"He went in his car from the city center to the outskirts. He set fire to the remains left by the harvester. Then he went back to the city council parking lot. Later he would go to extingish it as a volunteer."

Police have detained deteined a man accused of provoking several forest fires during July.

He used to start a fire and then rushed away. But last time he crashed his car into a wall. That was the clue that allowed police to relate forest fires to him. The invesigation carried out has taken up to ten days,

Witnesses also helped to indentify his car, which was seen by many of them minutes before the forest fire began.

Sadly, this is a true story.

July 29, 2015

This is the story about a guy who caused a forest fire on purpose so he could extinguish it right after. 


"He went with his car from the city center to the outskirts. He set remains on fire left by a harvester. Then he went back to the city council parking lot. Then he went to extinguish it as a volunteer." 


The police has detained a man accused of provoking several forestfires during July.

He used to cause fires and then rush away. But last time he crashed his car into a wall. That was the clue that allowed police to connect forest fires to him. The current investigation has taken up to ten days, witnesses also helped to identify his car, which was seen by many of them minutes before the forest fire began.

Sadly, this is a true story.

July 29, 2015
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