Midnight A day ends, and another day comes. I want to write a poem but lack experiences and proper feeling. Some nice things seemed to near but I actually can't obtain it.

Lew

Jul 29, 2015 4:47 PM

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Midnight

One day ends, and another day begins. I want to write a poem but lack experiences and the proper feeling. Some nice things seemed to near but I actually can't obtain it. ?

I'm not sure what your last sentence means. Do you mean that you were close to writing a nice poem or that some nice things were going to happen?

Good job & have a good day!

July 31, 2015

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July 30, 2015

I might send messages to you when I need a coach, thanks again.

July 30, 2015

Thank you for your help.

July 30, 2015

Midnight

A day ends, and another day comes. I want to write a poem but lack experiences and proper feeling. Some nice things seemed near but I actually can't actually obtain it.

July 29, 2015

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