My first note :)

Hi everybody !
I need to improve my English skills to reach a decent score (at least 80) in the TOEFL test! I need that score to be admitted accepted into to a master's degree program in my university, the Polytechnic University of Milan, which will be entirely in English by this year (I don't understand what you mean by "by this year". Do you mean that it was previously offered in Italian and now this year the program will only be offered in English?)! I studied English at school but nothing more and haven't had any practice outside of it, and I forgot the grammar and the lost my (I'm guessing this is what you mean) fluency :( !
Last but not least, I want to know meet new people and make new friends in this beautiful community, so feel free to contact me ;)!

Very well done! One quick note is that all languages are proper nouns so they must all start with a capital letter, ie. "English" rather than "english". Hope this helps, if you need any other help or further clarification please don't hesitate to ask :)

My first note Fisrt Note :)

Hi everybody!

I need to improve my english English skills to reach achieve a decent score (at least 80) in TOEFL test! I need that score to be admitted to the master degree program at in my university, the Polytechnic University on Of Milan, which will be entirely in english English by this year! I studied english English at school, but nothing more, and I forgot the grammar and the lost fluency :( !
Last but not least, I want to know new people and make new friends in this beautifull community, so feel free to contact me ;)!

Not a bad start Giacomo, I just noted a few capitalization errrors related to Proper Nouns, and a few missplaced words were all. If you would like any help to improve your English I'd be happy to help you. If you have any questions please let me know.